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gem n eye
I smoke a cannabis stick, youd smoke a hand fulla dicks
Aint from NewYork, and never been a fan of the Knicks
1st line i like second not to sure weak opener bcos of it
Suburbansinners a niche, another lyrical glitch
I gotta mayo covered flow and pullin Miracle Whips
like the way u playin with words it flow iight too
I make it critical quick, you couldnt pencil a script
To big, belittle my shit? a hoola hoop couldnt fit
sly jab ok
Black and white like a newsprint, Im duo through like a two wit
And pack a crew, madullas split, two different shoes just to prove it
erm......ok......i think......
Im a lucritive neusence, a kung fu grip ninja buddahst
Your shits more hebrew than Judas, a little stupid kid jew bitch
like the closer although a little racist not a KO thou
ssinnerisback
hahaha you gotta be joking.. seriously,
I'll leave your head smoking.. thinking deliriously,
weaker opener than ^^
Your rhymes are recycled and old,
They belong with my grandpas bicycle,
not complex but it flows weak punch
But I know you need to keep hold of the only few lines you have... so sad,
Cuz your momma had to write it.. with the help of your dad,
another punch that works
You totally blew the battle with the last line.. I know you had to get racist at times,
Thats the only card you could possibly pull,
You got no other diss on me.. the truth has been told...
good flow and like the comeback punch
"You totally blew the battle with the last line.. I know you had to get racist at times," those were to seperate lines, so i got 10
ok closer no KO
gem n eye
Suburban couldnt blurt a verse to twerk Gem
He's worse than churches searchin for a purse to burst in
good word play and opener like it
A merged twin's about to jerk your nerves and it's curtains
It's certain my sermon erks your verses when first in
like the follow through and the flow
I'm burstin with a purpose sure to reverse trends
No person or curb could swerve my works, nor a nerd- sin
again flow good not sure if it be a punch or what though
I serve bitches by the verb and thirst to curse them
Dirt denims couldnt hug my nuts like you skirts been
sly punch not to my likin but it works
Im the worst in the world to nurse a girl with a sure grin
Because your words are softer than a poem written with nerf pens
strongish closer but still no KO
ssinnerisback
Man your flow is way off.. like when people jump off buldings,
After my verse you choke and cough.. and your brain hit the ceiling,
yeah but no on the 1st line, but on it's own it works
Spittin lies through self glorification.. it's your specialty,
Trying to mentally fuck men through masturbation.. I will not let you wrestle me,
strongest punch i seen i think so far
Don't even touch me.. your not worthy, your a joke,
Fuck wit the verse you see.. and you'll croak,
again some simple ABC but it works doesn't it
a lil advice to you boy.. don't take jobs, keep the hobbies,
I hope you don't plan on making money.. your verses are sloppy,
good punch
So lemme finish this shit up,
You obviously wrote the lyrics to try to get you knocked out and your eyes shut.
weak closer no ko but it'll do
so there you go my opinions on your 2 round battle. gem n eye your flow and structure is iight elevate your vocabulary though and try to keep the racism on the down low. ssinnerisback you can get it flowin ya just need to work on your vocab really i guess.
vote : gem n eye
i've taken the time to drop you a few lines would appreciate if you could do the same to mine jus leave an opinion if you don't have enough posts to vote but could really do with some votes with the hope of gettin some of me battles closed.
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old battle....
uppin for votes.....
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gem edged this... his punches were harder hittin.... had much more wittier lines.... no hate to either cat i jus think gem came out on top... but for real.... advice to both... stop bitchin in a batle thread i dont wnan scroll down to read bs.... n wats the point of 2 rounds shits gay if u ask me.... why not jus make one round 20 lines instead of 10 iunno.... no hate stay up
vote - gem
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uppin....
answer to skrollz- becuz a 2round battle allows for a comeback/rebuddle in the event that its a close call...plus it leaves room for improving your next verse and using feeds if the rule isnt instilled.
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Gem n eye is dq'd for upping 9 times
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