Keep It Straight

Thnx Youngsta ans WP

I will read it.

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^..... common people, dont sleep, post links to your battles
and i will look at them. scouts honor.

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this verse was good, i don't think it was a 10/10 but it was nice. the flow was prolly the best thing about it. but at times it was forced, and the word use was just so scattered that the meaning could barely be decyphered. it was fun read, but things like imagery and consistency to the topic may have helped. but i got the message dog. this was good. props.

thx for reply.

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this was hella active... and should have been in hof.. haha

i liked this peice, up.

this was a good drop, flow and multis were amazin...theres nothin really bad to say about this..structure was good, was feelin the emotion in this..Im tired n lazy to do a longer explanation, but im sure you know where im goin with this... Nice peice, keep droppin stuff like this, i enjoyed it