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I liked the way it flowed and shit man ... aint got to much to work on .... really feeling the creativity on those punches...... stay up ... peace
one love va twin
the master of punchlines is back with another one...man what can i say that i havent before....the structure was ill the wordplay ill the punches got me laughing...you always elevating with every new post and i like that...keep spitting that fire holmes and get at me for that collab...one duke
new one drops tonight
shit was nice, i especially liked the end, ur line about the rebate was tight. good overall, but i would have liked it if the grammar was better, u kno, less typos, makes it easier to flow when i'm readin it, but be easy, that's a minor mistake. keep it up man
ok I liked this one.you sure do have a word of art.needs a little improvement on vocabulary.but keep it up man.that was good and I think you can do better.
peace.
hey why don't you come up with another one? I know you know that it feels good to be talked about.
i know i haven't done the feeback thing in a while but here goes
i dunno word
i've seen better from ya
ya shit usually be multi-packed or am i confusing you with johnny
anyway decent drop, structure kinda confused me tho