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Alright this was a tight Battle but here is my 2 cents...
I rip shit and twist it to end this misfit's existence
Like "martathon runners with asthma" .. dude can't go the distance
-Very Nice opener came out hard 8/10
This faggot's wack.. and shook like an earthquake
Rap's biggest mistake takes place...
-Alright please dont get me wrong but this bar doesn't flow ell if you were to read it seperately but if you read it as whole it does flow. 6/10
...................also known as his birthday
This herb's gay.. and I mean it in the worst way
Even in Scrabble.. the fool failed to drop wordplay
- Like this one a lot..8/10
Just like drunk boxers lackin' proper opTics
Fool's punches never land.....
...............you oughta stick to droppin' topics
-Ok I not a hard punch but it is still there 6/10
Why you talk shit? when you're packin' a cap gun
Your first loss to a novice...
..................and that's the saddest-fact-son (satisfaction)
-Good finisher 8/10
Total =36/50=72%
Extra comments I would just work on Strucure... But I really Like this..
Bitch you're quoteless, we all kno this. So hurry and quit the acts
Quit runnin your mouth talkin shit, and simply just face the facts
- Ok opener good have came harder 7/10
You're 10-0, but to battle a known veteran, you're still yet to do
You're just mad...
-ok I got lost here 3/10 and that three was cause I didn't wanna give you a 1
.....cuz i've battled against vets, And still got a better rec than you
Who you testin dude? You're nothin, stick to what you're known to do
Ya Cloaned IceMan's name, and still...... aint nobody knowin you
- Ok you should have said either something in bar before this one or thisone cause I think everyone wants to know what genocide is known to do??? 4/10
Do you get it yet? Nobody gives a damn about your text career
Yet you still post around, like you're the hardest and best in here
- This was a really good one and is probably my Fav deserves a 10/10
It's complex and clear, you dont belong here. Go back to rapverse
You've got no chance in beating me kid, you kno it. And thats word
-This had more potential but it wasn't there good though... 7/10
Total = 31/50=62%
Extra Comments... Try to Fix your structure a slash and double-slash are always good ways to seperates lines..///
Anyways my vote is too Genocide...
Keep Elevatin and Respecz
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Nice battle Genocide thought your drop was hot you came hard and stayed hard to the end good battle homie
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ok since you kids don't know how to vote... I'll break it down like this...
Genocide:
had CRAPPY wordplay... no punches... you're lines sucked... and it was completely gay... and don't try and beef with me cause I said this... I'd own you...
Your best line was a flipped line I used again Feeble or Young P... or Aisle 5
This faggot's wack.. and shook like an earthquake
Rap's biggest mistake takes place...
...................also known as his birthday
actually you're only half way decent line...
Tic:
better... attempted punches... not much needed to win... ok setups... ok punches...
Bitch you're quoteless, we all kno this. So hurry and quit the acts
Quit runnin your mouth talkin shit, and simply just face the facts
You're 10-0, but to battle a known veteran, you're still yet to do
You're just mad...
.....cuz i've battled against vets, And still got a better rec than you
Who you testin dude? You're nothin, stick to what you're known to do
Ya Cloaned IceMan's name, and still...... aint nobody knowin you
topped the battle...
Vote Tic... anybody who voted for Genocide either doesn't know a good verse... or they are dick ridding... face it fucks... You can't suck each others dicks for long... Soon enough you'll have to suck ours... *puts on Varsity jacket*
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genocide wins due to his verse had harder punches i dont know what more i can say tic urs was good too but genocides was just better
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holy shit avalon just owned every single person who voted....lmao*goes back to reading the whoring and wishes he had a varsity jacket*
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I rip shit and twist it to end this misfit's existence
Like "martathon runners with asthma" .. dude can't go the distance
-decent at best, ive seen this used quite a few times
This faggot's wack.. and shook like an earthquake
Rap's biggest mistake takes place...
...................also known as his birthday
ha, decent
This herb's gay.. and I mean it in the worst way
Even in Scrabble.. the fool failed to drop wordplay
-decent, but seensunthin like this before too
Just like drunk boxers lackin' proper opTics
Fool's punches never land.....
...............you oughta stick to droppin' topics
I like it, nice setup,
Why you talk shit? when you're packin' a cap gun
Your first loss to a novice...
..................and that's the saddest-fact-son (satisfaction)
nice wordplay and closer
Bitch you're quoteless, we all kno this. So hurry and quit the acts
Quit runnin your mouth talkin shit, and simply just face the facts
-filler, no punch
You're 10-0, but to battle a known veteran, you're still yet to do
You're just mad...
.....cuz i've battled against vets, And still got a better rec than you
ok
Who you testin dude? You're nothin, stick to what you're known to do
Ya Cloaned IceMan's name, and still...... aint nobody knowin you
-ok
Do you get it yet? Nobody gives a damn about your text career
Yet you still post around, like you're the hardest and best in here
-filler, no punch
It's complex and clear, you dont belong here. Go back to rapverse
You've got no chance in beating me kid, you kno it. And thats word
filler, no punch, not a good way to end it
Vote: Genocide, gens punches and wordplay>Tics verse, tic, had two bars i felt were ok, the rest were jus statements, Genocide, ur first 3 bars started out decent, but ur last 2 were pretty damn good, and u took this battle without a doubt
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Bitch you're quoteless, we all kno this. So hurry and quit the acts
Quit runnin your mouth talkin shit, and simply just face the facts
Who you testin dude? You're nothin, stick to what you're known to do
Ya Cloaned IceMan's name, and still...... aint nobody knowin you
Do you get it yet? Nobody gives a damn about your text career
Yet you still post around, like you're the hardest and best in here
It's complex and clear, you dont belong here. Go back to rapverse
You've got no chance in beating me kid, you kno it.
didint like the ending but coulda been good last bar... not bad some punches in there that had nice connection and mulites
vs
I rip shit and twist it to end this misfit's existence
Like "martathon runners with asthma" .. dude can't go the distance
This herb's gay.. and I mean it in the worst way
Even in Scrabble.. the fool failed to drop wordplay
i liked the scrabble but not the whoile verse.... meh....
vote - Tic
yeehhh
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damn gen
break down:length both
flow:gen
Vocab:both
punches:gen
wordplay:gen
vote/gen
stonger and over all better verse
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my bad enter to quick but gen had a over all tighter verse finisher was off the chain
tic i wont feelin some of your lines especially the opener so work on the other than that good battle fellas and keep it up and elevate
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You're 10-0, but to battle a known veteran, you're still yet to do
You're just mad...
.....cuz i've battled against vets, And still got a better rec than you
Who you testin dude? You're nothin, stick to what you're known to do
Ya Cloaned IceMan's name, and still...... aint nobody knowin you
that basically took the battle for Tic.. the last line especially killed it..sorry Geno, you just didnt come that hard.. really no decent lines at all.. you had some ones that could've been decent, but your set ups really killed them.. just work on your wording, thats what really messed up the final affect of the punch.. if you get that down im sure your punches will start comming out better.. but theres nothing you can do now.. your punches in this battle had bad wording.. =/
So V/ Tic
He had better worded punches, more fresh concepts, and his punches overall connected better
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Genocide`: tight verse, had really good flow, and I really liked your wordplay - Just like drunk boxers lackin' proper opTics//Fool's punches never land...you oughta stick to droppin' topics. It seems you were the underdog for this one, but you put up a real good fight. Respect...
Tic: Not only am I gun' come harder on you 'cause you got experience, but you also dropped real late. I know there wasn't no timeframe, but it def. plays as an advantage. You started pretty slow, but then with - You're 10-0, but to battle a known veteran, you're still yet to do//You're just mad...cuz i've battled against vets, And still got a better rec than you - you set the scene. But after that, all your punches were real general, and in the end you let yourself down. You had good flow, no doubt, and another personal def. would have won it for you. But I felt there was a lot askin' of you here, and you didn't cut it...
VOTE: Genocide`
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yo vote 4 genocide, sipmply for havin way better punches and flow.
can u return the favour and vote on my batte VS meloncholy.
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aight check it:
damn, this was a good battle...both you guys threw down here. ah shit, is gonna be tough to choose
well,
Genocide-I rip shit and twist it to end this misfit's existence
Like "martathon runners with asthma" .. dude can't go the distance
....very good opener;good punch......
This faggot's wack.. and shook like an earthquake
Rap's biggest mistake takes place...
...................also known as his birthday
This herb's gay.. and I mean it in the worst way
Even in Scrabble.. the fool failed to drop wordplay
....nice....good followers....nice punches
Just like drunk boxers lackin' proper opTics
Fool's punches never land.....
...............you oughta stick to droppin' topics
....nice punch and nice way to get Tics name in there.....
Why you talk shit? when you're packin' a cap gun
Your first loss to a novice...
..................and that's the saddest-fact-son (satisfaction)
......sick ending;couldn't have been better....
very nice rhyme genocide...very nice
tic-Bitch you're quoteless, we all kno this. So hurry and quit the acts
Quit runnin your mouth talkin shit, and simply just face the facts
.....nice opener.......
You're 10-0, but to battle a known veteran, you're still yet to do
You're just mad...
...little bita just a filler there.....
.....cuz i've battled against vets, And still got a better rec than you
Who you testin dude? You're nothin, stick to what you're known to do
Ya Cloaned IceMan's name, and still...... aint nobody knowin you
Do you get it yet? Nobody gives a damn about your text career
Yet you still post around, like you're the hardest and best in here
.....couple a nice punches, good flow, kinda filler, but still good.....
It's complex and clear, you dont belong here. Go back to rapverse
You've got no chance in beating me kid, you kno it. And thats word
....decent ending......
shit, tough vote here...but:
v/genocide because he threw hard punches, had more solid of opening and closing lines and had less fillers......but good battle to the both of you
Nigga you banned for d/r and voting for yourself, so yes, i am sorry geno, but this is suspected d/r. These same people vote in all of your battles. Vote dq'd
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Battle re-opened for suspected d/r and one bad vote.
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LOL... Tic didn't come too good, but it wasn't bad, some lines were good. Geocide started off good, but got played... Hell, I think I may have invented Scrabble lines in FL... Yeah, it was played.
That being said, he came harder.
This is hard to judge, but...
Vote: Tic
