DJB whooped yo ass boy! No Questions bout it.
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DJB whooped yo ass boy! No Questions bout it.
upsy dasie
up #3.....................drop links i will return the favor
up # 4 drop links and i will return the favor
vote djb
he merked this newb.. i dont wanna break it down cause its obvious,, ur punches merked him, ur metas n personals were just bonuses.. u won this easily.. other guy, more practice, ull get there, just dont spit that crap again.. ok cyaz.. and gl.
ey vote here in return please i wanna close this thing,, thnks peeps..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=159764
my vote dont mean shit, since i aint got the posts, but i'll give some unlopsided feedback.
djb was clean with mad punches and wordplay, clean from start to finish.. but the battling, battle me finish kinda lacked that big finisher after such a well dropped verse.
jerz, you had some clean flow but sometimes the way you typed your shit made it hard to follow how it would be layed out in bars and the punches were pretty general. attack this cat with some punches that are more personal and cant be used against just anyone, like pick apart his profile or signature or whatever.
that's my take, if i had a vote, i'd go djb on this one. if you guys appreciate the honest feedback, please drop an honest vote in one of my battles so i can close them out and start up some new ones. one.
Genocide...ur Worse Then All Of Them....dont Get Mad Cuz Of The Truth...just Cuz U Won Them Other Battles....dont Meen Shit....especially If Them Others Were Terrible To....hahah.fuckin Loser
man...it just seems foolish to clown a cat who's 12-0. i mean call me crazy... even if you can beat him you better dish some props n shit. where's the respect?
Ayo Flex...have U Seen N E Of His Battles....?? Then Ude Wonder If He Had Two Screen Names So That He Could Put One Wack Verse And Then Kill It Wit His Others....cmon...the Nigga Is Wack...numbers Dont Meen Shit To Me....skillz Do....
djb had nice structure and a great vocab as jerz did not djb also had hard hittin punces..while jerz on the other hand didnt really have any at all....
Vote: djb
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last upp somebody please get this closed. drop a link and i will return the favor.
djb - alright verse you can see that you tried to make your stretched bars fit tho.
ummm you got some gcreativity in the punches tho thats good , just try to formulate them better and harder and you should be aight .
jerz killer - structure and flow alright , not many punches , and nor were they hard , need more crative conepts and a better closer definatley and make personals