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show-ok flow, ok structure, ok wrdplay, sum aight punches(too simplistic though)
kaos-ok flow, ok structure, good multi's, sum ok punches(sum witty)nice nameplays
Overall-I think kaos punches harder came more creative and had more mutli's...show just try to be more creative with the punches, work on multi's as well.
vote-kaos
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uppin............................................. .......
Mr. ShowTime: damn nice flow and really felt your punches. If I could nitpick, I'd say what it's missin' was some personals...you mentioned his name, yeah, but sometimes it ain't enough if you don't engage them, esp. if they doin it to you. No hatin', good effort.
~kaos~: Nice opening bar, with a personal! ;) the rest of your verse was pretty general, except for ....so when i ask if this cats-ill..the answer is 'no, show'..like 'inactive battles' note what I told Mr. ShowTime? He lost this 'cause he didn't engage you, but you engaged him back!
VOTE: ~kaos~
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Upping this thread ................................!!