uppin for some more votes everybodypeeps!!!!!!!!!!
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uppin for some more votes everybodypeeps!!!!!!!!!!
everyones comments r helpful will hit back on your battles as soon as i get chance in the next couple of days. anyone else got votes and/or opinions leave em here. not bothered if you haven't got enough posts to vote yet just leave a voice!!
appreciate if anyone wouldn't mind either jus puttin an opinion or leavin a vote on this one tryin to get it closed!!!!
Living force I can’t believe that you’re such a ‘tard/
You take Viagra eyedrops to make you look hard/
LOL OK PUNCH
Gees man you so big that when you enter a room/
It don’t matter where I go I’m next to you/
WELL.. UH.. HAVE YOU EVER SEEN HIM? IT WOULDA BEEN GOOD IF YOU BATTLED HIM FACE TO FACE
Now you need to choose how to play this game with no rules/
When all I know is that you’re gonna lose/
WEAK
When I smack you u gonna go up high in the sky/
Many you gonna be flying up there/
WWWWAAAACK
When you see me about you so god damn scared/
That your follicles fail and you lose all you hair/
AVERAGE
So now I’ve left you standing tall/
And not to mention completely bald/
STOP TELLING A STORY ABOUT HOW YOUR MAKING HIM LOSE HIS HAIR..
Your fuckin friends won’t wanna know you at all/
If you fall on you face and lose this brawl/
WEAK ENDING... 5/10
man your styles dieng like leaves in autumn\
with rhymes like that i"d give you up for abortion\
WHAT THE FUCK THAT DIDN'T EVEN RHYME
im standing tall coz im da rock when it comes to my flow\
and you about ta get da peoples elbow\
SHIT.. JUST SHIT
i just pull out my dick and you get ready to blow\
yo dog i wont lose\ i"ll have you quit rap and start singing the blues\
DUDE THAT'S SO LAME.. WEAK FLOW AND EVERYTHING
one wrong move and i could rip out your spleen\
i"ll have you in londen licking da pussy of da queen\
IS THAT SUPPOSED TO BE A DISS?!?
you from black pool then you must be fulla marsh\ you suck so much dick you think sperm is a mouthwash\
OK.. FINALLY SOMETHING HALF GOOD
after this battle you"ll be suffocating like fish outta water\
in the future you"ll be seeing me fucking your daughter\
THATS JUST WRONG YOU PEDIPHILE
man im way too hot\
dont be mad coz i got more friends than you"ve got\
HOLY MOTHERFUCKING WACK... 3.5/10
v/tweetburd... other guy was amazinly wack
oh yeah and hit my back at my other battles please
okay only two more votes for me to take a victory on this battle anyone gonna come an have a look honest opinions and votes appreciated!!!!!!!!
if you're votin on my battles leave your links and i'll return the favours with honest votes and critism!!
Living force I can’t believe that you’re such a ‘tard/
You take Viagra eyedrops to make you look hard/
lol ok opener could be stronger
Gees man you so big that when you enter a room/
It don’t matter where I go I’m next to you/
lol nice i liked that
Now you need to choose how to play this game with no rules/
When all I know is that you’re gonna lose/
nah didnt like it
When I smack you u gonna go up high in the sky/
Many you gonna be flying up there/
? did like either
When you see me about you so god damn scared/
That your follicles fail and you lose all you hair/
lol thats ok
So now I’ve left you standing tall/
And not to mention completely bald/
nice tied in with above
Your fuckin friends won’t wanna know you at all/
If you fall on you face and lose this brawl/
hmmshould have been stronger for a finisher
not too bad. but as said it is pretty weak.
man your styles dieng like leaves in autumn\
with rhymes like that i"d give you up for abortion\
crap
im standing tall coz im da rock when it comes to my flow\
and you about ta get da peoples elbow\
feeding from his line
i just pull out my dick and you get ready to blow\
random line
yo dog i wont lose\ i"ll have you quit rap and start singing the blues\
no didnt like
one wrong move and i could rip out your spleen\
i"ll have you in londen licking da pussy of da queen\
ew mingin lickin the queens pussy
you from black pool then you must be fulla marsh\ you suck so much dick you think sperm is a mouthwash\
trying to b personlay but wasnt
after this battle you"ll be suffocating like fish outta water\
in the future you"ll be seeing me fucking your daughter\
lol your best flowing lines...
man im way too hot\
dont be mad coz i got more friends than you"ve got\
possibly the worst ending ive ever heard...
you both do need lots of elevation. work on multies and punches too fuck....
peace...
v/tweetburd
click n vote in the links below
Living force I can’t believe that you’re such a ‘tard/
You take Viagra eyedrops to make you look hard/
^ lol that punch line was great it was a little choppy after that i mean u punchlines didn't really do anything 4 me after that
you suck so much dick you think sperm is a mouthwash\
^ dmf was right that is ur 1 n only punch the rest was bs sorry just keep at and stay up
V/tweet