its gangsta paradise, but this bitch fuked up sumwhere
cause he cant rap naturally, let alone naturally grow his pubic hair
still a small bitch, out in the wild lookin for respect
and even if hes *online*, his punches will still *disconnect*
wit no disrespect, who the fuk would call himself assazin
the only 'deadly assault' u pull *off*, is when u begin flashin
look at his profile, bitch posts 17 a day, proves hes a net-addict
bitch got his weight upto fight, but got caught back in it
look at his interests, its takin lyricists by surprise
bitch couldnt *take-away* nothing, even if he ordered french fries
bitch likes to be noticed, i mean look he at the apogee
even if u beat me, u still got nuthin on me, cause bitches all over agree
U had a good opener and some nice rhymes. U had the creativity and the good structure and to top it all off u had the connectin punches all the way.......until the end. It was really a let down to see that ending. But everything else was good. It was hot.
first off you take shit..you a young buck...you aint even 18 or older
do some homework..study some rhymes..or keep ya shit locked in ya folder
it's gettin real suicidal..ya got scars on ya wrist..let me guess..from cuttin
you like a fucked up car..tryin to talk shit...but all I'm hearin...is puttin
ya verse wasn't even heat..but I forgot..you got instinct..cuz you a killa
ya sweet..a real cold piece of work wit no 'ice'...but just a tap...of 'vanilla'
you in my profile scared..lookin to elevate...or find shit to keep you boasted
my rhymes fly pass...ya ass.....punches smash....ya face in...while i'm coastin
ya note pads gon frm lunch...ya pre-written shit need's to be laced..wit savior
I don't throw punches..I get a KO..simply smashin ya face wit hey makers
you thinkin you the shit..huh..ya record is 8 and 13...you really not winnin
I'll simply take you off the charts...wit an assazination...like 'john lennon'
This was a good verse as well. Although the whole period uasage thing wasn't really workin for me, i wasn't feelin all that, u put em in places where they didn't really need ta be but, other than that, good structuer. U had nice rhymes and good punches, no real heavy hitters though, very unlike u, ithought. It was kind of a dissapointment to see no real knockout punches in ya verse but oh well, maybe next time.
anywayz my vote= killa for better punches.
hit up some of the battles in my sig. Peaceezy.
