Unique Resistance

Appreciate the rep J6F...

I'll get to reppin now...

Peace

dope verse. come try out for pandora's box, leave this link and im pretty sure you'll get in.

The people on here (besides Johnny 6 feet) all seem to have dropped bad feedback. A lot of the threads on here have people coming on who don't seem to have actually read the piece. Oh well.

I really enjoyed this piece. The flow was very nice, despite what people seem to have said. It might have been a little long, but only if you choose to think of it that way. It was a very deep piece, and I liked that. Like you said, people can draw what they want from it, and that's a very good thing. All the best philosophers seem to exhibit a sense of vagueness to their writings (but in a good way). The vocabulary was good, and you used some good multies at the start of some lines as well as the ends, which was a nice touch. The imagery was good too, and you had some very nice metaphors.

My favourite line of the piece was the last one. The depature lounge idea was very interesting. Overall this was a good piece. Well worth reading. It's just a shame the other people that have commented on here haven't really left very good feedback.

Now that is feedback... ^^

Appreciate it Dragon I... I'll rep some of your stuff this evening...

Peace

decent drop............100 % Poetry.......

^^ That was just pointless...