#5...Quote:
Originally Posted by Sir Loin
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#5...Quote:
Originally Posted by Sir Loin
Return the fava in the battle in my sig please, thank u
I'll bang the fifth, leave ya veins in twist...brains amiss
red stain ya fits, keep shootin till lead strains your ribs
-nice multies, no punch though, ok start
I'm walkin this earth with many unbelievable actions
& usin this 10 min key to murder ya like an evil blacksmith
-not feelin this
flip it like a dolphin, rap so sick the mic needs flu shots
I'm makin Woot look stupid now, like flat bitches in tube tops
-lol, ok
My bars will abuse ya, somebody please talk to this loser
Cuz woots no-comp, like my room was b4 I bought a Computer
-i like it
Now I switch pace with spits laced and extremele sick sprays
these 10 lines just left Woot 'abondoned rubbish'...a 'ripped waste'!
-iiight closer
ya lines sway more eyes than palm trees in deep wind.
Loin spoils from core to limb. its sunday, and ya still the weak end. (weekend)
-ok start
ya index fingers key softly, sounding the best youve heard.
my target title, is the first & only time i'll address you Sir.
-decent at best
hes 4-2. reduce by two and hes 50 percent at text.
why are you helping guests? when your just an apprentice at best.
-no punch, filler
hell probaly drop a verse on how hell kill me, or lynch my neck.
ya signature is more embarassing than ya rec, hints Not vet.
-decent personal, still no punch
read slowly, or leave collecting ya dome from dubri.
either ya have mad guts for steak. or ya didnt know it was ME.
-ok finisher
Im goin against the grain here and votin for sirloin, i dont c how everybodies sayin woot and better punches, when he didnt really use em in this verse, both had good structure and flow, but i felt sirloin took this with better punches, than his opponet, both were ok, but coulda been better cause ive seen better from both.
RETURN THE FAVOR,
SIRLOIN
I'll bang the fifth, leave ya veins in twist...brains amiss
red stain ya fits, keep shootin till lead strains your ribs
fair opener
I'm walkin this earth with many unbelievable actions
& usin this 10 min key to murder ya like an evil blacksmith
didnt rhyme and its filler
flip it like a dolphin, rap so sick the mic needs flu shots
I'm makin Woot look stupid now, like flat bitches in tube tops
better then before
My bars will abuse ya, somebody please talk to this loser
Cuz woots no-comp, like my room was b4 I bought a Computer
aiight decent
Now I switch pace with spits laced and extremele sick sprays
these 10 lines just left Woot 'abondoned rubbish'...a 'ripped waste'!
nice finish
WOOT
ya lines sway more eyes than palm trees in deep wind.
Loin spoils from core to limb. its sunday, and ya still the weak end. (weekend)
decent nothin special
ya index fingers key softly, sounding the best youve heard.
my target title, is the first & only time i'll address you Sir.
didnt really rhyme but meh
hes 4-2. reduce by two and hes 50 percent at text.
why are you helping guests? when your just an apprentice at best.
aiight meh somethin could have been better
hell probaly drop a verse on how hell kill me, or lynch my neck.
ya signature is more embarassing than ya rec, hints Not vet.
alright thats more like it
read slowly, or leave collecting ya dome from dubri.
either ya have mad guts for steak. or ya didnt know it was ME.
decent finisher
OVERALL
sirloin and woot were pretty much on par nothing really stood out and but sir loins punches had a bit more flow a power so my vote goes to
v/ sirloin
return the favor vote fair
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=153376
Sir Loin
I'll bang the fifth, leave ya veins in twist...brains amiss
red stain ya fits, keep shootin till lead strains your ribs
** blah!
I'm walkin this earth with many unbelievable actions
& usin this 10 min key to murder ya like an evil blacksmith
*** didn't exactly rhyme but wasn't bad
flip it like a dolphin, rap so sick the mic needs flu shots
I'm makin Woot look stupid now, like flat bitches in tube tops
**** lol i liked this one a lot
My bars will abuse ya, somebody please talk to this loser
Cuz woots no-comp, like my room was b4 I bought a Computer
** sounded stretched and the concepts quite played
Now I switch pace with spits laced and extremele sick sprays
these 10 lines just left Woot 'abondoned rubbish'...a 'ripped waste'!
*** decent closure
woot
ya lines sway more eyes than palm trees in deep wind.
Loin spoils from core to limb. its sunday, and ya still the weak end
** pretty decent... sounded a bit poetryish at the start
ya index fingers key softly, sounding the best youve heard.
my target title, is the first & only time i'll address you Sir.
** blah!
hes 4-2. reduce by two and hes 50 percent at text.
why are you helping guests? when your just an apprentice at best.
*** decent
hell probaly drop a verse on how hell kill me, or lynch my neck.
ya signature is more embarassing than ya rec, hints Not vet.
** didn't get it
read slowly, or leave collecting ya dome from dubri.
either ya have mad guts for steak. or ya didnt know it was ME.
** weak closure
Sir Loin - 14
woot - 11
Not a bad battle...
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Sir Loin is dq'd for upping over the maximum limit
woot wins
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