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that was pretty real shit dog
killer vocad an flow
keep doin what you doin
peace and stay up

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Considerably long in length - should go into audio if you've written this whole peice.

Nice work with the flow, on point, and good use of vocab...

I'm sure with a decent beat behind this, and providing its mixed well, this could be worth putting on to an EP or demo tape.

Put some actual vocalist skills behing this rather than just the written skills.

Props.

Peace

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Tha Begining And End Are Tha Best Parts But I Would Seggest A Usage Of A More Expanded Vocabulary.i Really Like Tha Message Of This Rap, But It Containslimited Visuals. But This Rap Is Easily Above Average.

uppppppp give some feed people

dat was sweet

in temrs of vocab this was strong, in terms of subject matter it was a great take on an exists topic but the imagety was the strongest aspect of this piece. just great work man. solid hook. multis wouldnt helped this much i dont think.

uppin this.