up#2...lets get some more votes....
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up#2...lets get some more votes....
0k
Ryme scheme was ok
Opening lines were blah
The embarrasement circumvent line wasnt wack but it was a hard diss...
The line after that was about average
That was an alright attempt at a punch... the jail and parole line... yea that ones coo
That finisher wasnt good
PM
Opener wasn't all that, I don't see why everyones so impressed...
Nice wordplaying.... and thought out bars
I liked that 4th line you had a nice punch in there...
The verse was shorter than your opponents but you had a better finisher...
All around solid short battle verse...
Vote goes 2 Post
Wack...my opponent got banned..
okay well since Ok got banned i will vote for PM
not just for that but i felt he had a harder hitting verse Ok came weak and played with some of his shit PM you could fix it so it doesnt look all stretched but we all have our off battle some times you had a couple quoatables in your verse as well good battle but PM takes it
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. 0K isn't banned forever. - Ambiguous
wtf, fucka ok you suck? what is that supposed to be?
^dumbass shut up now....
Yo post u came hard this nigga 0k dont kno shit bout rap...
ur opener was way better then his
ur closer was better
ur punches... was aight but better
n ya structure was aight... didnt stretch to many rhymes
jus work on how ya shit flows. some of it was forced, better vocab to would def up ur skills
0k... there is no hope for you im afraid. every rhyme of urs i read... u tried. n u tried hard but yo u aint good enuff... elevate much yo... ON EVERYTHING.
Vote... Posmortem
Return tha favor bro... finish this for me
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...34#post1786234
PostMortem won.. by a landslide..
0k
structure is decent.. some of ur lines were stretched though.. flow fell off a little.. no multis.. just a bunch of ass words put together.. attempted wordplay.. but none of it came out right.. no connecting punches.. i dont know if u can call those punches.. they were just wack.. no good personals..
PostMortem
structure is good.. flow is on target.. you had dope multis.. as well as good wordplay.. i also liked ur concepts.. most of them were original.. good shit.. most of ur punches connected.. one nameplay up in dat peice.. and by dat i mean that.. werd..
Overall
PostMortem had the better structure.. the more stable flow.. more multis.. better wordplay.. better concepts.. harder-hitting punches.. and a nameplay.. wherease, 0k brought nothing but wackness to the table.. so basing off of that.. PostMortem gets my vote for the WAY better verse..
VOTE - POSTMORTEM
Please return the favor with an honest vote on my battle..
..Its like half way down the first page, entitled 'Daedal vs. Makaveli Trained'
Werd.