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DA ILLEST!!
look....... listen to me for a second.....
this Mc talks like he rich, but i know he poor like a African Villiage/
(wack. and u dont noe this..)
You soft as cotton-candy to us Drug- dealing Killas/
My words leave you paroniod for 30 days/
You jacking off, while im gettin yah girl 25 different ways/
(wat...the...fuk...hell no)
We kissing and hitting different position's/
She likes my dick, and how i make her hot like the stove in da kitchen/
By now i got you wishin.. Praying you was me but you aint no politican/
(WACK.. u r sayin ur a politition, dey dont sell drugzz.!>)
And ya sister... I love the way that she sucks/
You Homeless Hoe... You want to wash my car for 5 bucks?/
(chinese rap.. in other word/wack)
You couldnt be in my sqaud.. cause the Image is to heavy.. You couldnt carry it/
I was just jokeing bout yah sister, she ugly as "Missy Elliot"/
(wack. dont joke in battles.)
Im only 15.. and still crushing these weak MC'S/
While yah moms stay falling like Alicia Key's/
(if u 15 how u hav ur licence, and ur a politician.. this was the best 2 lines of urs)
man that was wack elevate. newbz need to go to another site then cum bak here wen dey experienced. u had no serious punches.
EFFECT!!
Lil faggot...rite here we got beef to settle
so he posted //// to try and be at my level
(so-so)
you aint clever kid..my punches will shock ya
i dont think your the illest..but see a docter
(alright)
you wack..type-a fool to drop the sope
if he fell in his IP..he still cudnt BE dope
(nice)
get some rope..hang yourself till you need surgery
if i wanted to battle a baby..id go to your nursery
(nah.)
call the emergency...cuase you got merked in five
bars, votes...shit and fucking time....................
(ehh. nah)
effect u neva did that well either but i noe that u only needed a good punch to win this. v/effect
in return plz vote in this battle effect, i need some votes..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=152023
Man this was hard to call. Niether of you really hit anything. Illist yours was just wack. Whats up with the stove metaphore? Looks like you were really digging there. Lets see: You dissed his mom, Check, You dissed his sister, Check, You dissed the stove, Check, You dissed him, NO wait you didn't. I vote for Effect. Peace!
weak shit...
da illest: same ish throughout the whole verse...kept on babbling bout dick sucking five dollar family members of him...not very creative...ya punches were wack...no good personal...structure was off as well...overall bad...
effect: this must be the worst verse of a vet I have read in some time...anyway...u did come harder plus u brought multiple ideas to the tabble and u had a better structure...so due to u battling a weakling...plus better verse u win...
vote: effect
return favor on battle in my sig...pz
effect best:
"hang yourself till you need surgery
if i wanted to battle a baby..id go to your nursery"
Illest best:
"look....."
i guess that effect didnt try cuz i keep hearing regardless illest made no sense....
"Praying you was me but you aint no politican" wtf?
ne wayz illest dogg focus on the person u battlin....yo momma shit is overated newayz
v= effect
yo can yall vote on me vs. devastate mindz, king lyrical, fury? yo id appreciate it...thnx and good luck to both
I say Effect got dis N da bag he came wit stronger punches and was funny
to.... (If I wanted to battle a baby I could of went to da nursery dat was funny)..
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous
v/ effect
this Mc talks like he rich, but i know he poor like a African Villiage/
You soft as cotton-candy to us Drug- dealing Killas/
he doesn't talk like he's rich. . you can't be a 'drug-dealing killa' on the net.
My words leave you paroniod for 30 days/
You jacking off, while im gettin yah girl 25 different ways/
setup makes no sense. . you're not 'getting his girl'. . therefore a gay line.
We kissing and hitting different position's/
She likes my dick, and how i make her hot like the stove in da kitchen/
By now i got you wishin.. Praying you was me but you aint no politican/
who the hell cares what ya doing to his sister?! an why three lines to a rhyme suddenly?
And ya sister... I love the way that she sucks/
You Homeless Hoe... You want to wash my car for 5 bucks?/
INSULT HIM, NOT HIS SISTER!
You couldnt be in my sqaud.. cause the Image is to heavy.. You couldnt carry it/
I was just jokeing bout yah sister, she ugly as "Missy Elliot"/
after all those 'sister' lines you were joking?!?!?![/b]
Im only 15.. and still crushing these weak MC'S/
While yah moms stay falling like Alicia Key's/
you've crushed no one son. . what does 'falling like alicia keys' mean? she's tripped over?
stop insulting your opponents family an insult him instead. . alot more effective (pun intended). .
effect had mad played lines an i believe this was his worst drop ever on this site. . amazingly he still punched harder bar for bar.