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*Breaks to following ring down*
ill fuck you up worse than coke kid..and give you a buzz
past it..talk sick is somthing this kids Grandmother does
--cool
dont fuck with us..this may be an open battle i stress
by the look of your text colour..
..you went further and opend your legs
--nah
this kid is desperate...he'll do anything to make his brake
so he raped his own mother..and still couldnt rase a stake
--ok
youse a fake..using newb tactics..damn you should quit
-" whats with these..oh yeh fly's are attracted to shit
--lol
just got ripp'd kid..a wack verse..you aint here for the fight
hes got support..but how you get your zimmerframe on the site?
--not bad
not great verse...but it was aight
Oh fuck, ya shits so 'old' your lips should be 'sown shut'--
So you joined in 'September'? prepare to be 'blown up'--*
---nah played
Shit, after I 'burn' through you I be 'igniting the scene'--
And ya 'sharp thoughts' are only 'slicing your dreams'--**
--cool
Leave you bruitally bruised, I may be confusing to you--
I make you 'see more stars' than 'good movie reviews'--
--nah
Your punches jus 'don't connect' like 'phoney modems'--
Flows? I couldn't say 'they're great' if 'Tony' wrote em--
--first line PLAYED..second ok
Ya 'weight class' is seen wit a 'low amount of feathers'--
The only 'Effect' you got is the 'glow around ya letters'-
--ok
Judge won this as his one line made me laugh...talk had played lines and just oks
vote judge
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Close battle
Effect- You had an ok verse, some of your punches came played but yet creative, maybe you didnt rate this kid i dont know but ive seen better, felt this was good though "youse a fake..using newb tactics..damn you should quit
-" whats with these..oh yeh fly's are attracted to shit"..as for eveything else as i expected short sharp lines..flow was decent
Talk- You also had an orite verse...but some of your punches were played as fuck.and some were creative but i wasnt feeling them as much as i did effects unfortunatly, flow was ok..structure was nicely laid out also
It was close but..
V/ Effect..better punches and personals!
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judge won easily.. don't be stupid.
vote effect..
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous
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Oh fuck, ya shits so 'old' your lips should be 'sown shut'--
So you joined in 'September'? prepare to be 'blown up'--*
blah, seen this a million times.. drop the * and teh ''[/b]
Shit, after I 'burn' through you I be 'igniting the scene'--
And ya 'sharp thoughts' are only 'slicing your dreams'--**
ok
Leave you bruitally bruised, I may be confusing to you--
I make you 'see more stars' than 'good movie reviews'--
seen this type of shit before
Your punches jus 'don't connect' like 'phoney modems'--
Flows? I couldn't say 'they're great' if 'Tony' wrote em--
no
Ya 'weight class' is seen wit a 'low amount of feathers'--
The only 'Effect' you got is the 'glow around ya letters'--***
decent
*He joined in September, n "blown up" as in 9/11..
**Nameplay n his signature says ". Sharp Thoughts ."..
***Both his name and sig quote have the same blue glow..
we get it, you dont need to explain
ill fuck you up worse than coke kid..and give you a buzz
past it..talk sick is somthing this kids Grandmother does
decent
dont fuck with us..this may be an open battle i stress
by the look of your text colour..
..you went further and opend your legs
ok
this kid is desperate...he'll do anything to make his brake
so he raped his own mother..and still couldnt rase a stake
lol.. cool
youse a fake..using newb tactics..damn you should quit
-" whats with these..oh yeh fly's are attracted to shit
lol.. ok
just got ripp'd kid..a wack verse..you aint here for the fight
hes got support..but how you get your zimmerframe on the site?
decent
overall - talk came played.. nothing really hit, only his last bar.. effect came pretty decent, some good shit that made me laugh, so he got this with harder punches..
V/ Effect
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Uppin #2........................................^^
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effect
ill fuck you up worse than coke kid..and give you a buzz
past it..talk sick is somthing this kids Grandmother does
weak
dont fuck with us..this may be an open battle i stress
by the look of your text colour..
..you went further and opend your legs
not bad
this kid is desperate...he'll do anything to make his brake
so he raped his own mother..and still couldnt rase a stake
weak
youse a fake..using newb tactics..damn you should quit
-" whats with these..oh yeh fly's are attracted to shit
lol, nice
just got ripp'd kid..a wack verse..you aint here for the fight
hes got support..but how you get your zimmerframe on the site?
weak wording
talksick
Oh fuck, ya shits so 'old' your lips should be 'sown shut'--
So you joined in 'September'? prepare to be 'blown up'--*
weak
Shit, after I 'burn' through you I be 'igniting the scene'--
And ya 'sharp thoughts' are only 'slicing your dreams'--**
good
Leave you bruitally bruised, I may be confusing to you--
I make you 'see more stars' than 'good movie reviews'--
i seen the concept a few times so played
Your punches jus 'don't connect' like 'phoney modems'--
Flows? I couldn't say 'they're great' if 'Tony' wrote em--
nah, i didnt like this
Ya 'weight class' is seen wit a 'low amount of feathers'--
The only 'Effect' you got is the 'glow around ya letters'--***
not bad, setup spolied it
vote-effect
only 2 decent bars of each fella here, and effect were slightly better.
hit this up with a vote plz
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