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aight,
Cunny, i thought ya verse was coo, i mean it's not bad fo your first topical...u managed to have good vocab, which was a plus...n u had the idea...ur strucute started off consistent then fell apart tho
Tim, ya verse was ok...fo the most part, u stayed right wit the topic, n u added good vocab along wit interestin details that kept a good flow throughout... yeh good story toothe dads name took this for u..earl what!
V/ Tim, fo better consistency n overall flow....
Thanks for the feedback people, uppin for votes to finish this. Ive already lost so get it closed.
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ok, Cunny this wuznt 2 bad, id say decent, i dont really kno wut happened 2 ur structure n flow tho, i mean i wuz feelin it at first but then it just seemed 2 get worse n worse, vocab wuz str8 tho, n for da most part u stayed on topic
Timmy, pretty good verse, stayed on topic, n wuz very consistant, da vocab wuz good, n wuz feelin da flow, it wuz somtin i could actually relate 2, n ur structure wuz very easy 2 read, lots of details 2
vote-Tim
Uppin to get this Battle Over and Done With...
For Crew Battle Sake......
Cunny Funt- Good for your first time, work on your vocab and structure, it looked kinda messed up. Started strong then started to drift from the topic. But keep at it, you'll soon get real strong at topical.
Tim- Like the other guy said its very obvious you've been at this alot longer, you came hard and produced a deep verse. Dope as. You stuck to the topic better and showed better vocab. + Your dope structure made it easy to read and flow well. Dope verse man.
V/ Tim
^ Heres my link
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...47#post1760847
Cunny - Alright verse for your first time... work on your structure and your vocab, everything else was alright, you seemed to fall off of the topic as the verse went on. not bad keep at it
Tim - Structure made it really easy to read. Vocab was great, flow was on target great drop your verse was deep in emotion and kept me interested thw whole way through
Vote - Tim
drop an honest vote on the battle in the sig
heres ma link
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=142386