Raindrops.

man this was one of the greatest yet playa good everything i really like this peice
stay up playa

lol thanks............................................ .bounce

bounce.

with a need..to fulfill my duty..touching earth with my existence
as excitement builds up..now I visualize Earth from a distance

wow now that was a good drop feelin those lines i posted at the dope you had a nice flow and a great rhymescheme on this piece the multies didnt over power it at all the emotion you used was also fantastic keep it up

thanks man.....................................

yea this wasnt as dope.. but yea it was really aboe average.... at some parts i though it wasnt as good but some parts was dope... nice shit nice drop... ya flow is good and ya had some nice structre... also i can feel wat ya mean.. nice imagrey too. the rhyme sheme was very good though some i thought was a lil elementary...... but the sylable counts for the rhymes was definatly good...

very nice kid i love peices that you can follow like a story and imagari was sicckkk

-Bounce-

loved tha multis bro, them hoes was ready, ya doin it big man, i really felt this piece kinfolk i liked the imagery, stay up bro

word.

last up...............

A science lesson? lol very good, I liked how you portrayed the rains persepctive. His feelings while falling. Really good.

Ha

This was an interesting read. Very different from my point of view. I was feeling the flow here. It seems you have a knack for topicals rather than battling. Imagery was smooth. Most defintely one of the better pieces I've read in awhile.

Stay Up

Dom

i liked it alot man u had good flo good use of words good jus bout every damn thing id love to battle u sumtime but not now ill just keep readin and learnin ya hurd lol. peace man keep it up and ull b a legend fo sho'

ECE
DJ

yea this was nice,
.. flowed good .. i specially liked the immagery in here.. potraited well
good multi usage, and the closer was real nice, well done mate.

And if I had the art of speech..id be voicing this ambition
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I freeze in this position..now the sun is out..my home becomes more clear
Lying unaware that im here to be condensated back into the atmosphere.

yup