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Ace tells stories that illustrate the topic, so it was no suprise he came up with this drop.. I liked the imagery, the structure is tops, and the wording was to the point that it flowed consistently.. I liked it, a nice drop all together.. I also thought that you stayed on topic well, so props for that man..
"His destination, was nothing short of a comp screen
Not nearly a geek, but miles from dating prom queen"
^^nice, I really liked these lines
Tim did this topic real well, cos he hit the spot in a lot of things I can agree with personally.. Topic was followed nicely, structure and vocab was dope, images aiite, but for me, its all about the way his ideas come off.. I got it.. and it helped me decide who was my vote ina hard battle between two formidable opponents.
"no quittin'...so sue me then, everyone went through the newbie trend,
but tell me who the fuck said, u only dope if u post over and over again"
^^lols.. I smiled at this.. dope..
Vote goes for Tim, Ace followed topic well, and presented mad images.. but Tim took it for really illustratin the downfalls of net rappin.. Props to Both..
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aoa....you came pretty tight...vocab was on point and you stayed on topic for the most part of the verse..but unfortunately i didnt think you came as hard as tim...got topic verse thou
best bars:
A fallacy in his reality but he fell into the great trend
Feeling slightly satisfied the time he reached elevation
His destination, was nothing short of a comp screen
Not nearly a geek, but miles from dating prom queen
tim...nice drop dawg...it relates to all the people on thiz site pretty much..lol..your vocab wasnt as tight as aoa..but on the whole you stayed on topic and some creativiy was there also....
best bars:
who the dopest heads? someone gassed by they own friends?
I'd show respect, but how can 18 year olds then, be known vets?
half yall, havent grown yet...some creative, but still not worthy,
its hurting, when pic battles prove most these kids are nerdy,
stay surfing...but I wont be evil & hate on u people's lives,
winning's ur ego's pride, reason I dont see why some need to bite,
vote=tim
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aight, sorry but i gotta say Tim took this one, his actually stayed good da whole way thru, mayb even got better, but ace didnt start off too bad but then i dont kno wut happened, also i felt wut tim had 2 say a lil better, a bit more creative 2
vote-Tim
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lol you voted for the wrong guy
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nevermind lol wrong battle
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uppin for vote anyone leave links and can a mod delete the last two posts thank you
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Tim..
Very nice.. A good read, and well on topic.. Some multies I think but not many, structure was ok, flow was nice.. Not too too creative, but ok in that department.. 7.5/10
AoA..
Wow, nice.. Structure was perfect, flow was nice, nice multies, nice staying on topic, and very creative.. Nicely done, keep up.. 8.5/10
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there is nothing to say as u can see aces shit was shooting at tims and tim had nothing to protect himelf of off that cause ace was nicer and clean and everyword he wrote he meant it this battle is over
v///ace
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^DQ that vote. lol.
eh, uppin this for some votes. drop links.
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Man first of all I'd like to say both pieces where dope as fuck... very nice Job
Ace: Dope piece... excellent flow, vocab and structure made this a joy to read. The way you laid it out was dope and some great imagery. Multies where also good.
Timmy: Also dope piece... excellent flow and vocab... great imagery and some of the lines really made me think. Great layout but multies could have been better.
V/Ace of aces for having better multies (yep that's all that separaterd these two.)
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Tim Corleone has only one more up...
Anything you post after that is a DQ.
This battle's been open way to fucking long.
Peace
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Played topic guys but anywayz...
Tim..Your verse was ok..but nothing really grabbed my attention when i was reading it..you was just making statements..rather than using meta4's to put a exclaimation point on his bar..flow was stop start also which didnt help..try and be clever with the verse and add some complexity with it
Ace- I was feeling yours more..the flow was consistant which made it more of a joy to read in my book, there was alot more complexity in your verse than tims and wit..like timmy u made valid points..but u came over better by making it more interesting of a read..maybe u coulda lashed out at users by saying something that the reader would be pissed off with like...y bother posting another thread will come alone and erase the fact in peoples mind that his/her work ever existed..know what i mean..it was an decent verse anywayz good job
i took time hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...2&page=1&pp=15 pz
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wow...first of all, i think both of yall did great...
Tim, u had a real good verse...ya structure was straight...overall it had a real nice flow...n i liked how u had a lotta complex rhymes in there, too. U definitely did a good job wit imagery...i got a good visual from what u were talkin about cuz u were describing the environment so well....good piece
Ace, i thought your verse was strong too...i particularly liked the structure cuz it was tight n gave your piece a very strong flow...again, there was real good imagery...u gave good details on the MC u were describing....n also, i really liked the closer...good piece
this shit was mad tough to decide on...i thought both of u were pretty much dead even....
V/ Tim by a hair, cuz i thought he kept a tighter grip on the topic...
i need an honest vote here if yall can:
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