Now...can we cut the bullshit, people?
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Now...can we cut the bullshit, people?
wow.........crazy topic.....
still_remain=your opening bar was crazy nice dawg......
"A planet with less interface to proprogate their species
The universe's outer perimeter, Earth's faith appease these"
the content of the verse was well organized...structure was solid and effective...i thought the topic was a view from heaven...not a view from god eyez himself...you put alot of firstperson statementz in your verse......
i liked it thou....much respect
Camrok=thiz was seriouz maan....the topic stayed consistent through out the whole verse...content was seriouz maan...had me glued...vocab was above average i did see some fill in llines thou.....
"He didn't like what he saw, the Creator saw the things above..
said things will be bad, when push comes to shove, but still I love"
the best thing i thought was that it started to get betta towards the end...which doesnt really happen as much on topic battlez.....
best barz=
"A world bestowed of honor and glory, fights n' rages
rights fought in cages, strict law abide in Gladiator Ages
Sages, of the monk type, seeking a final called liberation
Invisible boundary lines hasten, as people expand their nations"
vote=camrok
GRR AT PEOPLE NOT EXPLAINING THEIR VOTEs... Cam, you complain to much of fear of losing to who you thought was an underdog.
lmao.. i understand how my vote could be dq'd btk.. but i mean really.. take a look at my posts in Mondo Thugs.. if you acutally read them.. 98% of them have no point at all... basically i just go and freepost like crazy in their forum..
Mondo thugs = my freepost forum..
so on their dicks? no
i never didnt vote fairly.. ive voted against crew members, people who i know on rb.. im always honest..
but i guess u just doing ya job
1.) you are considered an underdog, so why would I be afraid? If I lost to you, I would admit it and have no problem. I refuse to lose under false circumstances.. and D/R.Quote:
Originally Posted by Still_Remain
Stop having friends vote...
were obvious unfair votes.
uppin 4', leave links...
honest votes now.
actually this is the 5th upp.. i just counted..
DROP LINKS.. damnit.
1-0
my vote goes to still
i felt he did the topic better, to me his peice was organized better, and worded better when cam was "how did this war create?" i kept saying the shit over and over cuz it didn't sound, so i felt he could have worded that better, all this shit came down to wording. cam has nice parts but his again with the wording , "sages, of the monk type" i wasn't feeling. i don't think cam tried his absolute best cuz i have seen better
still quotables
best bar to me
" Where through disbelief, suddenly, your bloody soul was gone
Till everybody was slowly drawn to study the Holy Karan"
" But these poor people some of them good; I give my strength to priests
Its a sore when they become Evil the touching of little boys must ciest"
cam's
best bars to me
"To gain a better view on the world, a new soul was born..
His name was Jesus, he came from God- human love was sworn
God took a good look through Jesus- look in a new perspective..
The Creator saw his creation as human, was his own elective"
damn i forgot my link here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=149956
Is it just me or does it look like Still_Remain fed off of Camroks verse
...they had way too many similarities...I give complexity and originality
to Camrok...I thought Still_Remains' verse was a bit wordy at sometimes
..emotion was close, but I give that also to Camrok...imagry
was takin by Still_Remain....I feel in topicals that the 2 most important
things are imagry and emotion and since its split 1-1, the originality is
the tie braker.
Vote=Camrok
please both if ya peep the link in my sig..thanks
link.....damnit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=149978
2-1 uppining for still
so many peepz with unexplain vote i think theres to many d/r'z on this site but w/e
Uupinh This So It Will Close!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Camrok, I was really surprised with your verse...you had some deep emotion in this, and like lyric said thats one of the most important factors in a topical. Your imagery was not as vivid as i expected but you had creativity in this which is a big plus...
Still, I actually liked where you went with the topic a little better...your imagery was your strong point...and like others said, your wording was more organized and fit together more smoothly..
this was a very close battle but im going to give it to still by a landslide...