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Kid's gone mad, if i said spit first he'd probably say hell no
Couldn't find the time to rhyme, he's being tickeled by Elmo
Aight opener
LM couldn't rock a big show, couldn't even get quarter venues
If you wanna battle him then just pull up to the order menu
No, just, no
I fathered this kid's style, it's no wonder he's never really won
And i mean damn he's from the beach so he's used to getting sonned
Might have been good with good wording, but not that great with current wording
It don't matter, get a tan, ya going through different shades of whackness
No matter how dark you get you guaranteed to get up on my blacklist
Funny
Looks like i just missed your birthday, here's a belated gift at no cost
Completely free of charge I'm gonna present you with another loss
Nice closer
You want to battle and your askin me to help you rap n rhyme
I took a nap in time..to still wake up and bust a cap n'zyme
Good opener, a bit played though...
Its not a crime..to lyrically distatch this bitch completely
Im actin discretely..but thats cuz i know you wont beat me
okay... great
You cant defeat me..N'zyme sounds like some type of chromosome
Check out the dome you own..when you walk in..Im like the homos home
I don't understand it
It took your bitch ass that long to drop..and it sucked dude
With 2 lines i would truck through..follow your sig..cause fuck you
lol
Peeps ask and i say i roasted him..cuz look at the time i posted in
You suck so much i havent even dropped and i got a vote to win
lol
V/LM, for wittier endings and a good opener
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Lyrical:
You want to battle and your askin me to help you rap n rhyme
I took a nap in time..to still wake up and bust a cap n'zyme
creative at best.
Its not a crime..to lyrically distatch this bitch completely
Im actin discretely..but thats cuz i know you wont beat me
vocab is too simple
You cant defeat me..N'zyme sounds like some type of chromosome
Check out the dome you own..when you walk in..Im like the homos home
again up your vocab.. but ok.
It took your bitch ass that long to drop..and it sucked dude
With 2 lines i would truck through..follow your sig..cause fuck you
sucked dude and fuck you.. need better vocab still.....
Peeps ask and i say i roasted him..cuz look at the time i posted in
You suck so much i havent even dropped and i got a vote to win
if it's true then its ok but i dont see how
nzyme:
Kid's gone mad, if i said spit first he'd probably say hell no
Couldn't find the time to rhyme, he's being tickeled by Elmo
NO.
LM couldn't rock a big show, couldn't even get quarter venues
If you wanna battle him then just pull up to the order menu
that was completely irrelevant.
I fathered this kid's style, it's no wonder he's never really won
And i mean damn he's from the beach so he's used to getting sonned
... weak.
It don't matter, get a tan, ya going through different shades of whackness
No matter how dark you get you guaranteed to get up on my blacklist
get a tan? from what? come on now.
Looks like i just missed your birthday, here's a belated gift at no cost
Completely free of charge I'm gonna present you with another loss
this was your only decent line, period
V/ Lyrical for coming less wack, but you both need to elevate
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plz hit up the johnny damen battle in my sig with an honest vote, thanks.
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^^i will hit up your battle when you poll on this one....uppin 4
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I polled as soon as I voted..
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*N'Zyme*
Kid's gone mad, if i said spit first he'd probably say hell no
Couldn't find the time to rhyme, he's being tickeled by Elmo
......ok opener
LM couldn't rock a big show, couldn't even get quarter venues
If you wanna battle him then just pull up to the order menu
.....wasnt feelin this one
I fathered this kid's style, it's no wonder he's never really won
And i mean damn he's from the beach so he's used to getting sonned
.....not that good
It don't matter, get a tan, ya going through different shades of whackness
No matter how dark you get you guaranteed to get up on my blacklist
......pretty good stuff
Looks like i just missed your birthday, here's a belated gift at no cost
Completely free of charge I'm gonna present you with another loss
......real nice closer
Your ending was da best, started out real weak...
*LM*
You want to battle and your askin me to help you rap n rhyme
I took a nap in time..to still wake up and bust a cap n'zyme
......good opener
Its not a crime..to lyrically distatch this bitch completely
Im actin discretely..but thats cuz i know you wont beat me
......couldve did this one better
You cant defeat me..N'zyme sounds like some type of chromosome
Check out the dome you own..when you walk in..Im like the homos home
.....u tried too hard with this one
It took your bitch ass that long to drop..and it sucked dude
With 2 lines i would truck through..follow your sig..cause fuck you
.....pretty good
Peeps ask and i say i roasted him..cuz look at the time i posted in
You suck so much i havent even dropped and i got a vote to win
.....nice closer
Overall pretty decent, couldve did some stuff bit better tho....
Vote: LM
