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Smoka-your structure was better then El's.... your flow was good and it was onpoint didnt really fall off at anypoint... punches was good except that knocking on elwood line other then that all your shit was solid man... good verse
Elwood-verse was alright... stucutre a little off... flow was okay could have been better... you could have taken this battle if you rewored your punches and came wit a lil bit more wit but you didnt so that is why you lost.... pc
v/smoka
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yeah, i know structure wins battles..
up :)
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wow this was a nice battle both MC's came hard at each other
Elwood:
Smoka's with the crowd of punks, so ill bring the heat bitch,
With so many waves goodbye...... this bitch got sea sick,
i like that opener shit was crazy
When in the ring with the best, You bite their lines see,
So now when Smoke posts his verse...... he includes a bibliography,
that was ok
IJL's decent, Still dont have half the skill i do,
Claim your not on Feebs dick..... But didnt you retire too?
nah wasn't feeling it
Im being serious, Say your gay? No fair,
Yeah Rv is whack... Turns out half your crew came from there,
wack
Your not on my level, But people are too informed to care,
I admitt this cow comes raw...... but i prefer mine medium rare,
this was ok
Im hittin a nerve, You'll come hard, thats not wrong,
Cause when Smoke clicks.... Its usually Imperial at RM.com
it was alright better then smokes closer
Smoke verse
Fuck this kids beliefs, just remember Smoke is dust, ya see?
So when this bitch bites the dust....it'll be me all over your teeth
lmao nice punch man nice opener
^That's about my fist you weak hoe, ya verse is merely a giggle
And Elwood has a purpose....without PO in the fucking middle
lmao nice purse
Quotables might cherish ya, but sadly...you know what's scarier?
That they know ya numbers are up...in every mens stall of ya area
it was ok
Said he's got a bitch, that's cool....I know the truth you fuckin tool
Found out the bitch swung by his house...cuz he lives near the school
lmao nice as punch
Said he had good shows...sorry, but the yearly concerts had to stop
Cuz I've just knocked on Wood so much....he's RB's laughing Stock..
blah wasn't really feeling that
Every hit missed whore, ..and Smoka is a win that you won't afford
Cuz like his verses....Elwood not only drops shit, but he's piss poor
blah closer
So i think smoke took this he had way better punches and had me cracking up
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omfg next time can ya'll state that you need 200 post to vote damn well return the favor please link in sig.
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Yall Tripping Bro To See That Elwood Won, This Was Joker All Over It, His Punches Were Tight And The One About The Purpose Without The Po In The Middle Did Have Me Laughin, And Elwoods Verse Was Just Boring To Me, So In Con Clusion Although U Need 200 Post To Vote Im Just Showing Feedback
V/smoka
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Elwood
Smoka's with the crowd of punks, so ill bring the heat bitch,
With so many waves goodbye...... this bitch got sea sick,
pretty tight..
When in the ring with the best, You bite their lines see,
So now when Smoke posts his verse...... he includes a bibliography,
ok..
IJL's decent, Still dont have half the skill i do,
Claim your not on Feebs dick..... But didnt you retire too?
decent, nothin special..
Im being serious, Say your gay? No fair,
Yeah Rv is whack... Turns out half your crew came from there,
is this true? nice..
Your not on my level, But people are too informed to care,
I admitt this cow comes raw...... but i prefer mine medium rare,
aight..
Im hittin a nerve, You'll come hard, thats not wrong,
Cause when Smoke clicks.... Its usually Imperial at RM.com
ha... aight closer
Smoka
Fuck this kids beliefs, just remember Smoke is dust, ya see?
So when this bitch bites the dust....it'll be me all over your teeth
would not of made much sense, but line 3 made up for it... so it was decent
^That's about my fist you weak hoe, ya verse is merely a giggle
And Elwood has a purpose....without PO in the fucking middle
witty wordplay personal...
Quotables might cherish ya, but sadly...you know what's scarier?
That they know ya numbers are up...in every mens stall of ya area
ha..decent
Said he's got a bitch, that's cool....I know the truth you fuckin tool
Found out the bitch swung by his house...cuz he lives near the school
ok...
Said he had good shows...sorry, but the yearly concerts had to stop
Cuz I've just knocked on Wood so much....he's RB's laughing Stock..
aight aight... nothin much
Every hit missed whore, ..and Smoka is a win that you won't afford
Cuz like his verses....Elwood not only drops shit, but he's piss poor
played concept but never seen it flipped like this, so decent
Overall: I thought it was pretty close... but smoka's consistency took it b/c elwood fell off a bit in the middle or so, if he would of kept up with his opener I believe he would of won.. good battle though fella's...
Vote: Smoka
RETURN THE FAVOR (CHECK SIG)
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aight both fukn good flows.. i felt that elwood got this for 1 reason.. the 1 reason i could think that just made him get this vote is because i liked it more. both had evrythin a rap should hav but in my view elwood jus took this..
v/el
peace!!
ayo in return vote in mine
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=147822
and this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=147706
thnx yall!!!
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now im able to pole a vote..goes to person i originally voted 4 pz
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Up #4, and I'll reply back to your battles ASAP (to those who left links so far)
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i thought that Elwood took this, i just thought his punches were harder hitting and were more on target, dont get me wrong Smoka had some NICe punches but i think that Elwood just had better ones. both structures were good, this was VERY close and i stress that word, but i just thought Elwood edged this one out on his punches.. good job to the both of you and good job Elwood....
v/ Elwood.