I'm leaning towards Feeble's verse as the winner...
There were so many good lines here...
But the "assault weapons" and "chrit" closer edged this for me...
Classic battle
By a smidge, Feebs.
Peace
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I'm leaning towards Feeble's verse as the winner...
There were so many good lines here...
But the "assault weapons" and "chrit" closer edged this for me...
Classic battle
By a smidge, Feebs.
Peace
dope battle
but that write dude is incredible if there was talent like that here a year ago i wouldnt of left nice one guys
Write had the personals, no doubt..... but right when I started reading Feebs verse I was laughing my ass off.
For some, the way Write's verse made us go "damn, thats cold" was what they were lookin for
but for me, when I read a verse, I want to laugh.... and Feebs made me laugh a grip. A couple of real creative lines, while write's were mostly right to the point without much creativity... I've said it once and I'll say it again... creativity always takes it for me.
& ain't won nothing important before, ur fucking lame & im iller
which explains why i pre-inscribed your name on the silver
it started from that & kept gettin better
vote - Feeble
BTW - I'll be in LLL next season, other than that I won't post much, but put me in Feebs
pz
Um... This was really, really, really close, as I predicted. But I think I slightly liked Write's verse more for wittier punches and some wordplay that Feeble failed to bring like he usually does. Good battle tho.
Vote: Mr. W.Rite
this was one tight ass battle, kinda wut i expected, but i think feeble had some bars that were overlooked
& ain't won nothing important before, ur fucking lame & im iller
which explains why i pre-inscribed your name on the silver
^^^that was a tight line, i think b2k recognized it or someone else, but alot of the voters overlooked it, and the last line he had, bout chrit, nobody got that?
he's never one to post in threads, still people hype this loner
so when u walked off with the win, how'd u distract the rightful owner
^^that was a nice line too,
not takin anything away from mr w, but it seemed that everyone reckognized his lines and overlooked feebles
^^^^vote = feeble, i jus dont think ppl should vote if they dont get all the lines
nuff said
that first line you quoted was dumb simple
Not in L.L.L. But I am this season, so I'll just vote anyway.
This was fuckin' close. First of all, every single punch W.Rite had was dope, well, most of them. "Action" line was dope, "demodded" line was a good personal, etc. Closer was great. Dope verse, props.
Feeble came really good too. But here, the difference is, I felt W.Rite's punches hit harder. I said "damn" & "woah" on almost every punch W.Rite had. Like I said, this was really close, but...
V/Mr. W.Rite
It’s a fight to the finish, he’ll be catchin left hooks…and right jabs
And I’ll be sendin him home packin….his face with ice bags
--decent at best.
You’re fucked…W.Rite’s mad…get another dude to replace him
Now I’m ready for Action…cus that’s who I shoulda been facin
--wording was good but this kind of punch is too used to be really dope...i try to stray away from them myself.
Pleaded to save’em…needs the net to keep him on the right track
Got demodded…then asked me to help him get his life back
--dope, no question.
Rode me to get here…im’ the shit bro, he’ll do anything to get close
In fact my head can’t get any bigger…w/o making the bitch choke
--boo...be done with dick punches.
It was destined to happen…if I were u I wouldn’t invest in this faggot
He’ll hide behinds his looks, with a lock on his medicine cabinet
--haha
I beg the question, who are you? But its his rep that beckons
He’s the first, last and only to nominate his self in legends
--niceness
Come your hardest…you’ll still lose I’ll put ya prayers to rest
If I came half ass
Its cus Nique almost beat u and she was barely dressed
--not so tight
Speaking of Nique, ya flows the same…i’m just stating the facts how
He took her style, not just text….but her dress with the back out
--redundancy...get her out of your verse.
Leaves the text scene a loser…and knowing he’ll place second
And lives in the same box…we used for his going away present
--dope
DM don’t need you …get to stepping and leave the rest to us
Held out his hand and I gave him five…quarters to catch the bus
--only good
are u a mess or what...mistaken to think this cat can touch me
He’ll lose here…but first to win an Oscar for acting ugly
--nah...
Sex lifes in question...nothing to hide except this bitch is gay
If his walls could talk...they still wouldn’t have shit to say
--mediocre.
Cant explain the loss well.....so I’ll give him the best reason
U didnt lose the final...you just got a rough start for next season
--no
Feeble takes over the league and the good heads upped and left
Beat u and become legend... this is how Evolve must’ve felt
--poor rhyme...not the best punch. Feeble won that battle.
This dude’s a bum...a lazy fuck, so tell me why would I care
And the word on the street is.....that you still reside there
--nice.
RB hates this fag...but he thinks he’ll make the best, believers
Switched names moved to RM but don’t get respect there either
--heh
Get you aim list for votes...knew u weren’t who u claim to be
Bitch im facin u this week...WHY THE FUCK ARE U AIMIN ME
--good
fuck it im’ spent...I cant believe I took a shit on my rival
we’ll even exchange, I’ll give you the L, u just give me the title
--boooo...too many lines, don't cave.
Start all the bitchin and whining...how can u be proud of this shit
Six million ways to die and still managed to go out like a bitch
--hard, good. i even liked this as a closer.
nice verse, personals and shit were good..
feeble.
im nicer than you... this bitch is just a fool in disguise
that verse looked so much like a novel you'll win the pulitzer prize
--kind of wack...but...more just...meh
& ain't won nothing important before, ur fucking lame & im iller
which explains why i pre-inscribed your name on the silver
--this is really dope. and to the point.
i bring fire at haters, u stole my style, u better admire creators ..
only speak if u have sumthin good to say, explains why he's quiet by nature
--okay. tight actually. just not the wording that W.rite had.
he's never one to post in threads, still people hype this loner
so when u walked off with the win, how'd u distract the rightful owner
--okay...
all u have is dr's, u cant compete, its your fault stepping man
ur verses make for a smaller magazine than the assault weapons ban
--not that direct..but creative nonetheless.
your anti-social here, and i run cross country but fuck it dude
ur so fast u ditched ur efforts to win & they cant catch up to you
--good...nice.
LLL over-rates you.. the course your heading's deception
thats only cuz you're the best man..... at a wedding reception
--pretty cool.
u act like your a fan of the truth, and you aint the man to accuse
u told me u flip lines, i see ur d/rs now as they chant an excuse
--shitty
Quote:
Originally Posted by Siege
so you thought I was wack? and that I cant key sickness?
bitch, ill stomp a mudhole in your ass and plant trees in it - Pav
just saw this at another site
his > W.Rite's
Booo...not a fan of quote punches either.
i got the win securely, ya spittin poorly & finished surely,
i don't have to put you under siege, wise ways did it for me..
--pretty okay.
u wished for glory, HW title.. back when me & K largo had had it
write wants to trade styles so much i put an embargo on fabric..
--actually..ill.
im tired & the evenings thru, give me a reason to be beating you
maybe you'll take the belt, after all i aint signing up for season two
--okay at best.
i'll whore this fag, crack on this kid.. a meek dreaming user
cuz write gets put down more than a weak team of movers
--terrible!
i heard that winners circle line of urs, so many bitches hating when
they can only flip lines, you've moved on to manipulating them
--nice, simple, witty, to the point...ill
you needed revenge, committed and declining to quit
write got his pay back, found his I.O.U. & started signing the shit
--haha
dont matter ur talent, you'll leave with a fucking concussion
i'd dwell on your skill... but you didnt put much up for discussion
--no!
i lack hard personals & punches, im hyped emphatically
while the only thing you lack is the fucking right to battle me
--nope...
im a jew rebelling against my religion, but still in a doper class ..
so when i drop pass-over, you'll drop from an over-pass ..
--first i thought this was wack just because of the jewish theme. but, hey. not bad. pretty tight actually.
salute u goodbye like a gentleman, u get dispatched cuz im godly
so i'll shake ya hand... but it won't be attached to ya body
--pretty good...for anything other than finals.
you think your matching my verse, but ur a coward, doubt it
cuz u got wind of my skill & it caused a power outage ..
--meh.
pussy never partys at all, its not just in rap he's a bitch
write thought drunk driving was running a taxi for chrit
--tight
W.rite wins...only because his read as a play-off verse, Feeble's didn't...I went into this thread thinking i was voting Feeble because i had previously thought the inscribed in silver punch was really dope but it's clear that he didn't win this...
V- W.rite
Touchy kids.....sorry I didn't vote for you Feeble.IDIOT.Quote:
Originally Posted by Feeble Minded
yes I agree with the bandwagon.
I was seriously expecting Feeble to win this, but W.Rite had alot of good lines.
he only had about 1 or 2 lines that were blah.
on the other hand, Feeble came dope too, with some lines that I thought were some of the best in the battle.
but, that quote brought him down though.
I remember I was battling Action in the pre season, and I used a quote punch.
And someone said "it was played 8 months ago on rb, 18 months ago on rm and 18 years ago in life'
lol, so, the same thing applies here.
nice attempt though,you two inspire me to elevate more and more.
so, anyway, back to the battle, v/w.rite, for a more hardcore, raw spitting certified gangsterfic verse.
Geah
Nice battle
*yes i already know i cant vote*
feeble is my boy and errthing, he helped me elevate and all this so i natuarally lean towards him regardless but w.rite commited a sin aganst him and i felt sorry for feeble...sorry.
good battle, write wins.
btw, only LLL can vote in LLL . thats the point of a league people. if anyone could participate, we would call this front lines.