other prospectiv v quick wit it

yo forgot to say it but repay the favour plaese. thanks other p for your feedback on my battle can ya'll giv feedback thanks.

quite a strong first battle from both!!! other p had better flow but a bit to much self glorification. anyway a fair draw!!! no hate!!!

other prospectiv had better punches although it was close. quick had better word play in his verse. flow went to quick but other p had better structure.

close battle guys but this one goes to other prospectiv for better punches.
v //// other p

oh yeah repay the favour in the battles in my sig.

come on lets get some votes on this ..

quick...

the evolution of ya wack rhymes is way beyond years
and the pain that i'm going to inflict is way beyond tears
Meh...weak.
u can't beat me u got a better chance of seeing "aveon-chairs"
punchlines have u going bold like u got "radiation-on-ya-hair"
Not bad...decent concept.
u couldn't come nasty if u were a bitch with no tampon on the rag
ya lyrics are cold in lamen terms ya just playing "freeze-tag"
Again, not too bad.
i got levels of different raps i can reach like their numbers on a "key-pad"
i'll put a noose around ya neck like a dog with a "flea-tag"
Didn't really get it...
fuck peace u wanna step to me i say give "me-war"
ya rhymes wouldn't be above me if u was the 'r' and i was the 'f' on a "key-board"
Nah, stretched and played.


Other...

So for both of us on this site, this is our first real battle,
This bitch is gonna go cryin to momma so prepare the rattle,
Nah, very weak and played
The latest newbie fight has just been opened, quick wit it and prospectiv,
In this bout beating your sorry herb ass is my main objective,
No punch
After that im lookin for a knock out, it’s prolly gonna end up like that,
Say goodbye to your family boy, cus you’re goin into hardcore combat,
No punch again
Can’t believe that you accepted my callout, stupid little child,
Im gonna kill ya with this verse that has just been complied,
No punch again.
Don’t know why you have bothered turning up, should of no showed,
Cus this verse is full of good shit it’s about to fuckin explode.
Again...no punch.



Ok, overall Quick took this with about 2 half decent punches, both verses were kinda weak, but it was only your first battle so that's ok as long as you learn how to use punches and not just go on about some shit. flow was fairly good by both of you as was structure. Keep elevating :thumbup:

v/ quick wit it

uppin on this ....
(4)

thanks for all the feed so far

wow a first battle for both it was a good one
I liked both verses a lot both had good structure and wordplay
punches were throwin by both kats a lotta of'em were landing and
a lot were missin.
personals were there to in a way still both had good verses

my vote goes to Other Pro because in my eye's he came with
better flow and wordplay and he wasn't using weak lil rhymes and shit
but yea this is no hating so peace be still.

V/O.P.

God danm dog i have to put a vote on other prospectiv cuz some that shit quick wit it was spitten was gay like thee radiation shit that was whack fo real

v/other prospectiv