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"I waited 2 hours for that?????????????????????????????????????????????? ????????"
couldnt of said it better my self, datzecho spit some hard hits. but i dunno even know what ..Sporadic.. was trying to say.... didnt get that whole biggie line.. wutever
vote = datzecho
Dat
Yo, emcees like you battle rookies and he still fails.
I murke jerks who flirt wit death from brooklyn to wales//
erm ok i suppose wasnt dat good
If we counted battle sales, you would never reach your quota,
you go flat like soda, I drop like clearence prices,this battles over//
This was aight good flow
apocoliptic predictions, forseeing how sporidicaly you will loss.
Deaths served in twos, I Slay crews, you sinkin like a titanic cruise//
flow was ok weak punch
take a step in my shoes, and walk through lifes missery,
the greatest come back of all times in rapbattles.com history//
WACK SHIT BOUT URSELF ASWELL
thats only eight bars, but people feinin for me to spit more,
I would have beatin this bitch even if I had only spit four.
Weak shit again flow was wack
Sporadic
Alzhemiers kid, 200 posts....................... forgets to set a battle theard
Even this were an excution................ in rap u still wouldnt be-a-head
Wack shit flow was wack punch was wack
Your wack.....................rapping like a uncomplete circuit current flows
Only way he gets props, is shouting it in cave recieving it from echos
wasnt feelin it reall weak
His Occupation is battling this whole site.......but in skills you lack
If it were your real job.. after the first bar you would ov got the sack
witty but fuckin weak dawg
Your verses amaze me..... dont get it twisted its not coz their great
Coz you've battled many times..........but you just do not elevate
was decent i suppose
brooklyn has great... rep for good mcees used to believe it were true
Lets see there was notrious b.i.g...but shit what the fuck happened with u?
decent finisher
Vote=Dat obicously took this explained enough
Return da favour plz links in my sig
fucking bull shit..how the fuck am i losing dont u guys get the wordplay?.fucking newbies half of his verse didnt even rhyme...echo stop fucking swaying the votes
LMFAO @ newbies... Kid, I would rip you apart with writer's block and a keyboard without vowels. Shut the fuck up and learn your place. The first battle I've ever written will destroy you unimaginably easily.Quote:
Originally Posted by ..Sporadic..
And as for voting...
Both of you did blah, but Sporadic had more complexity in his verse, and therefore took it. I'm hoping that peeps with so many posts can put up a better vewrse than this. But yeah, Sporadic had more complex and better punches and personals.
Vote: ...Sporadic...
dat takes this one...his lines were easier to follow..his finisher was ass but he had ounches...spor had mad more wordplay and multis but dat made me crazk up a few times and he was more enjoyable... my vote goes to him hit my sig man pz
Thanks too all critics, your info will give me inspiration to elevate. I will be sure to vote as much as poss to return the love.
one.
yeh will it will it also give us ome initiative to return the honest vote favor...hit my sig lol
I just did man, go look. And I dis not vote for you for any reason except you spit a better verse. ait, HONESTY in voting is only way to really help, one.
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Originally Posted by Neuro
lmao..in that vote you gave Dat a wasnt good,aight,weak,WACK and weak
you gave spor a wack,weak,witty,and 2 decents...so how did Dat get ur vote?
who do you vote for then? I dont see your vote, do you feel I lost that battle?
Dat had much better wordplay first of all, and more accurate punchlines in my opinion. THough his structure wasn't better and neither was his flow. He had a damn good opener in my opinon...lol.
Sporadic, get if of the dots and shit...lol. no need in that. you had a good verse as well, just dind't hit more accurate as dat did, and he had more personals as well. No hate..
GOOD battle. :)
what a load of bull shit...cant believe i am losing this....wtf....this shit is defiently going to the admin
If Datzecho drops ONE MORE POST he is DQ'd.
Read the rules...
Each of your posts that complains, insults a voter, or just bitches in general...
Counts as an up.
So...
Datzecho has dropped 5 ups, that's the limit...
ONE MORE POST and you lose.
Sporadic has upped 3 times, he has two more times before HE'S DQ'd.
That is word.
Peace
datzecho : u had a few hot bars in there well luke warm ones and u have to type of flow u got nice vocab but it doesnt matter if u cant put them in da right order so da spit is nice and clean cut........step up ya game and write more to help ur freestyle
..Sporadic.. : u have no structure what so ever and dont know what u wuz tryin to do wit all dat ........................................its lame so stop it, if u wuz on da mic u gonna stop like that???? u would get booed off stage playa.
no hatin on either of u, i just call em how i c em
vote:datzecho