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This battle was weak but the MC still took this
The Mc u had decent punches structure was ok aswell ur vocab was aight had a good structure but u cudve came a lot stronger this weak from u ive seen u do alot better
Tragik - u need to elevate alot dawg ur punches were weak your structure was decent cudve used better wordplay ur flow was good but u need to elevate alot dawg
Vote=The Mc
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I agree, punches too soft, and could have been better.
over all, TRAGIK gets my vote, was a funnier, more personal verse. better content, and flow all together.
vote = tragik.
Dont mind me just gettin post can vote, good battle
^^ dats jus freeposting ur gonna get banned for dat shit get ur post count up by battling or postin relevant things in the thread
uppin 4 i return favas just vote honestly here thx 1
uppin 5...last uppin vote plz
I cant vote coz im new and aint got 100 posts yet but id prob back MC, Chapstick line was pretty witty, Tragic you know your rhymes are poor when you have to interpritate them at the end
Whatever I'll beat you both
Kaibosh
V/ Tragic
Reason: The kid just threw more punches, Mc was talking some shit, some of your barz could have been turned into to punches but just ended up useless.
Tragic wasn't that strong easier but he didn't waste lines.
Sorry I can't poll
Nice battle could have been more interesting....
Tragik opener wasn't that strong, structure through the written was ok, kinda shakey at times, bestline
"thats the meaning of THE MC, u sound lyricly crippled to me."
It was nice but could have been used better
6/10
The Mc I know you wasn't trying hard but I gotta go with what I see....
Opener could've been harder, but got stronger through out the piece and you finished stronger....
Best Line
"he wants to battle vets to earn respect,maken me laugh,
im not even tryin in this verse and im merkin him fast,"
That was tight your lastline was right in there though
Vote: The Mc
tragik came nice in this battle.. i felt like the mc had some weak lines like leave more holes in you than tupac.. socks.. and diss about his house.. shit was all kind of weak to me didnt seem to me like he came hard enough
tragik came with solid punchlines from the beginning of his verse to the end of it.. lines such as "the mc?..bitch please..you suck dick fo free.
this hoe give more blows than a bruce lee movie."
and the line about him hidding his battle record were good
i feel like tragik won this battle easily
i vote fo The Mc nice structure,flow,punches were good and he seemed a lil mo focused plus he had great originality
Tragik neva use ghost write again its bein played out but u had structure,flow was aiight,punches decent,ur originality was real low