uppin...lets get some votes in here...last up fa me
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uppin...lets get some votes in here...last up fa me
I-Hova - The thing about Janet Jackson was good. The rest wasn't. You have no flow, your structure was confusing and off and really your punches weren't very good anyway. Work on making your verse make more sense and having direct punches on your opponent.
Playboy - Not great, but enough to take this. You had very simple punches that didn't hit very hard, but they were punches at least while I-Hova was just rambling. The letters thing was an okay concept though it didn't really hit hard.. you thought of the idea of "eye-hova", but you didn't really write a punch having to do with eyes so work on making your setups and punches relate. However, your punches still hit harder.
Vote - Playboy
You both have to elevate... I-Hova... yuo have some ok ideas but your sturcture was horrible... alot of it was juft fillers... and your confusing structure alone was enough for you to lose this battle... work on your structure...
Play-Boy you also didint come very hard... but alot harder than I-Hova had some ok punches structure was on target.... vocab was alright.... not bad... but lots of room for elevation...
overall - whack... but play boy comes out on top...
Vote - PB
yup..this was actually semi-close in my mind...
Ihova you attempted alot more metaphors, but honestly man, they weren't really that beneficial to your verse. A couple metas like in PB's verse (and more punches, personals) is better in a battle verse. I felt PB's verse wasa little more direct, not much.. but a little bit. More direct with punches and personals, and just felt he simply came harder. The wisconsin line wasa nice try... but don't think it came off well.
vote-pb