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I should be able to vote on this...
anyway,
Fanta Zee your verse flowed fairly well and you had a few strong punches. Structure was also quite good. i like this line
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Originally Posted by Fanta Zee
rapcharflow was poor and there wasn't any strong punches. The opener was poor and the closer didn't even sound like a punch
overall, i think Fanta Zee won this
v/ Fanta Zee
either people ain't keying in their votes after their explanations, or they just ain't got enough votes to do so...thanks for the cred anyway! (I love y'all!) yeah my verse was kinda flat, lol, i'm not much of a battler, but i wanna get this closed, its been like ages!
FantaZee, I really liked your verse. It flowed really well and while none of your punches were over the top, most were ok or decent. See if you can add more personals in the future though, this could have been to anyone.
Rapchar, saying he belongs in a spelling bee is actually a compliment.. it means he spells well. You need to think about what you write as most of your "punches" weren't really punches and were just statements that didn't hit. You also need to elevate as your rhymes were basic and you need to make them naturally fit in. Keep workin on it
Vote - FanTaZee