poll vote please and i will return the favor!!!!!!!!!
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poll vote please and i will return the favor!!!!!!!!!
Rockabitch:
my punches leave you 'swollen' like faces on hundred bills...
i heard you spit 'big' words naw you just feelin a 'numb' grill...
wasnt feeling it
checkin ya profile you betta 'Return' to Tha westcoast...
you gon off chronic na bullets left ya chest of smoke...
lame, 1st line was ok, 2nd didnt connect though
from the first bar you was 'Dammed from tha start'...
I rock bitches who act 'Diesil' and tear "A Man Apart...
1st line your dissing his first bar but you spit first, 2nd line bad wording, just ok
i only 'grazed' you wit disses like grass to 'cattle'...
jadakiss shoulda included 'WHY' i ripped ya ass in battle...
the cattle/battle line is played but you had wordplay so it was decent, 2nd line was weak
Tha Return
your location originally said Italy you wanna try some sausage???/
you rock bitch, naw my dicks the only thing you'll be rockin/
bad opener, coulda hit but need to word it better
ur a gurl and a newbie so Imma take it easy/
heres some advice quit rappin and be Tha Returns main breezy/
didnt hit her
ur rhymes were koo and ur similes were great/
a punch, shit i'll hit you wit two fingers like what you use to masturbate/
first line you gave praise, dont do it again, second line a lil weak
Iight both came weak, Rockabitch you had good structure, ok wordplay but could of worded it better to hit harder. Return you need to work on that structure, your opener you coulda worded a lot better, neither of you had decent punches. Erin came more complex, Return you came with lame disses about her being a girl, i thought this was a close battle, erin just work on wording you material better and you will be fine, Return come more creative, both keep elevating.
Close but my vote is for Erin Rockabitch, for more creativity, complex, and i thought her punches landed harder.
erin_-didnt really have good punches or vocab,or wordplay,tha return had better punches and wordplay.vote tha return.
tha return DQ'd for upping to many times