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this is a one sided battle....
opinion - your structure was pretty wack man, pretty wack....but you had some fuckin solid punches, great insults comming from you, just put your punches into place
threpac - WTF was that???? jesus fuckin christ that was so shitty man, you fed the whole fuckin verse, and...coz i'm gonna kick your ass 2 seattle,???? wow weak punches, horrible verse
v/Opinion for way harder punches
this was another weak battle
opinion- you could have came harder on ya opener. Ya flow and structure was very off. Punches were just plain lame and you didnt have barely any personals in ya verse. Work on wordplay, look at other battles to get the idea. Also, work on vocabulary and multis it will give you an advantage.
threpac- you could have came harder too. But ya flow and structure was ok. At least it was betta. Ya rhymes are basically too corny and simple, increase ya word choice and rhyme complexity. Punches and personals wasnt doin it either in ya verse. But i do think that ya closure got u the advantage. Still a weak verse though.
v/threpac
WACK BATTLE WOW THIS WAS WACK
opinion - you had better punches then threpac but your structure man was so horrible you gotta work on that totally
threpac - weak ass punches, it was all feeding and just bad bad bad rapping, wack structure too..its hard to chose a winner for this one it was so badly done, but im gonna go with opinion because he had way harder punches then yours and yours was all fed pac