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Stubby- pretty decent verse, opener and closer were nice, the punch connected for a nice hit. Came more personal about him losin two battles, him from B.C. Structure was pretty good and your flow was nice
Gizzard- your structure and your flow was screwed, it was a hard time reading your verse, try setting it up the way stubby did and not in paragraph form. Couldnt find any personals or punches, and it was a pain reading your verse. Rhyme scheme was off.. Some of the stuff you had was wack about you and your boys smoking weed and doing LSD, that has nothing to do with the battle
V/ Stubby for having punches and personals, structure,and overall better verse
gizzard: lmao, wtf were u doin. your shit looks like an essay. I didnt read your whole verse, if i did i would have been here all night. From wut i did read, i noticed u had weak punches, no flow, bad structure, nothing. Bad verse dog.
Look up different battles if u wanna kno the right structure u need to vote.
stubby: Not a the best verse, but was enuff to beat this other guy. You had better punches, better structure, better flow, better everything. Theres not much that needs to be said.
v/stubby....can yall return the favor...link in sig
V/stubby
Stubby/ya shit was decent but kind played at certain punches,
Tha hooked on phonics was elementary but it beat what he was throwin
or wasn't throwin,Jus work on punches and personels more
gizzard
Ya shit was strait played Tha stuuby chubby shit was wack
You had alright flow but none of that shit had hardly nothin to do
wit this battle like Man how can u give height and weight of a cat you've never seen
IDK elevate man
V/Stubby