? well okay theres a vote... uppin!!!!.......................
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? well okay theres a vote... uppin!!!!.......................
I agree with bxp in this one. Generic did have better punches and personals in this one and thats why he takes the battle. mc merc, your structrue was horrible and it messed up the flow of your verse. The structure......Really didnt .....Help your at.....all in this.....because it hurt.....the flow.....badly. See how bad that is. Dont do that. It hurts your punches also. Punches were decent but use personals.
generic had some good lines in there that made me chuckle a bit. And they were decent enough to make hgim win this battle. Punches hit and so did personals, use more of them though. Also the flow was good and structrue was normal, whihc is good. Good job in thsi and keep elevateing
V/Generic
hit up a battle in my sig please
wow. im winning 2-1.... LAST UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LAST UPPPIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i will hit up a battle in ur sig....................
i deleted off the hooks bullshit.
dont beef in people battles. leave your vote then be on your way
This battle sucked ass...
MC_Merc: It wasn't a good verse. It wasn't personal enough, and I felt your metas were weak, like the Benz line. Nice try here, but if you can make your bars hit harder, they would be strong to go. Maybe you should battle me. There's always something to say about someone named God... It's a hard knock life.
Anyways. Keep elevatin'.
generic disease: Wack. But you had nameplay, which always goes far in battles, and you also had personals. I didn't like the verse, but here's no doubt it was effective enough to grant you this win. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: generic disease
return the favor and hit this battle up...its a month old..
and majorly slept on...much appreciated
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=132986
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how u just gonna say nice battle.. u cant do that.. u have to vote.. and u need to go check in...
generic-You had an Orginal Verse and not much in there
but you had the flow and similies and metaphores and
overall your structure was decent and had a lil Bit There
mc merc-Close but I think you slipped hear and there but
you had the flow and metaphores and not much vocab or
no multies or nothing but thats what made you slip
Overall-GD Takes this because he has more overall things
and plus he had harder punches
v/Generic Desease
Return the favor please and Close it http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=136585
Mc Merc-
First off whats with the periods, let me fix this so i can break it down.
generic joined a crew hoppen he would be the best
sadly he could not prevail, like giving up his mamas chest
-weak opener
you have eight wins, yet you lines are stretched, i am the end
you like a golf gettin played, by an e-class mercedes benz
-wack
i've seen your battles against newbies, yes i am very impressed
that yo battle skillz are just below a neaderthal, who dont know his own sex
-an OK punch
little bitch i rape you with my lyrics, best not be fleeing
dumb broad,you'll end up like that bitch they're analled and bleeding
-weak
you get more confused then an iraquian who moved to the burbs
thats why after this line, you wont realize you've just been served
-An OK closer
Generic Disease
yet my lines are stretched? look in your, goin in diff. directions
this "merk" jacks off constantly and still cant grow an erection
-punch hit, ok opener
im gunna "violate" this "lyrical" disaster until he steps down
im gunna "strike" this bitch out like "Danny Almonte" on the mound
-weak, and dont start the two lines off the same way with "im gunna"
damn right u shud be impressed with my skills of "merking"
thought i was finisished? cant stop, wont stop, this whore needs more working
-OK
this kids a fake, like a pasty white kid wearing a du-rag
my "9" wins arent gunna be fake, like newbies battlin Mag...
-first line was good but second line threw me off
i just got served? i never knew this was a dance competition
ima gunna have to make u 1-3 knock you down like heavy duty demolition
-1st line good, second line the punch was lil weak
MC Merc, get those periods out of your verse, and most of your lines were weak and one was just wack.."you like a golf gettin played, by an e-class mercedes benz"...no, work on your flow too cause that same bar didnt ryhme either.
Generic Disease, work on some of your punches, the danny almonte thing is old, it was a year or two years ago when he pitched that no hitter, get that old stuff out of here. But you did have some punches that connected.
This was a close battle but Generic took this one with harder punches that connected
V/generic disease