Round One: +Danny Ocean+ vs. Lyrisic

Lyrisic: Express line was cool. Information leak was alright. West were kinda blahesque. Your flow was a little off. Came with decent wit in a few bars but not enough. So...overall an ok verse. you shoulda used an oceans eleven line.

Danny: Dont use visuals no one gives a shit if your verse is pretty. Ok. You had the better flow but you have to find a way to get rid of those little half lines. they kind of fuck it up. Work them into the punch. Dont use a "whos line is it anyways" line. Radio line was blah. Your opener was your only slightly decent line. Structure was off.
So..
Vote/lyrisic.

7-4 me...this is a damn good battle...regardless of the winner...i have to give props to Danny on this one...cant wait to see how it ends...

dannys verse was def. below average....ur punches sucked... i dont know how ne one voted for you, ya shit was basic... and didnt diss the kid good enough... wack

lyrisic.... average... flow was a little off.. punches were better than his so...
u did ok, enough to win.

vote - L

peace

danny- you should really just write in normal color, that red just looks weird. And like Jobus said, your lines were also strange...written and split in half like that. Sometimes people can pull it off ( I think M~M does something similar?) but you didnt. As far as the actual verse: you had that whose line is it anyway punch. And the rest just didnt do it for me. Not well rounded enough.

Lyrisic- Your structure was def better, no doubt. I dont think any of your punches hit like his Whose Line, but they were better than the rest of his. It made yours more well-rounded and overall better.

Vote- Lyrisic

vote danny cuz he got punches multis and humor, lyrisuc just had personals better..danby better werdplay

can i get a second opinion on that vote^^^from TheWonnishEye....i didnt have a single personal in my verse, aside from the ocean line...

weak battle..

Danny - started off well, but then came pretty whack near the end. your opening 2-3 bars were pretty tight

Lyricist - boo.. elementary shit pretty much... punches didnt hit him well... and wasnt enjoyable to read..

v/danny

lol...elementary...aiight...9-6 me....still close....

Going with Danny on this one

damn i ahte ho all the newbs vote for one person and everyone who knows wut there talking about votes for the correct winner......... lyrisic.........

V. Lyrisic

both werent the greatest. . in fact both werent great at all.. but some ones gotta win

lyrisic hit harder wit his punches

so he wins

vote..Danny was feeling his drop more in the 1st few bars he was dope but then went downhill..
Lyricsic..punches were weak and barely hit him..
pz.

it's 10-8
The realist and Dizzles vote don't count.Plus one voted for me and one voted for u.

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Originally Posted by +Danny Ocean+

Whorage is automatic when i force feed heat to this faggot
get clapped bitch...
He 'posted his verse' when I said take a 'whack' at it
That's very close to being a 'groaner'. To much Full House for me, personally. 2/10
It really is that big? ur smallness creates womens comments
Acknowledge his sig cuz.......
Lyrisic can only spit when him and his dog lock lips
Umm... this was not insanely wack, but it does come across as being heavily played. 2.89/10
This bitch gone fighter?Well I can extort truth in many ways
Ur just an Improv biter, Whose Line Is It Anyways?
I sounds like many people have used this line, but I've never seen it used. I like it. 6.89/10
I detect ur spit cant blaze me ho, Dan Ocean goin pro bono
U couldnt get on Radio even if cuba gooding went homo
Could've been used better. The idea was okay though. 2.666/10
ur layin flat on the mat....
Has Been that has not yet been clapped, so i begin attacking
Ur a waterd down Sapp ,worse than Warren fasting
I actually don't mind this. I haven't read what others have said about this one in particular yet, but i'm willing to give you a 6.66/10

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Originally Posted by Lyrisic

I'ma merciless savage going up against a cat thats sub-average
Basically you couldn't save yourself if you were waiting for marriage
Stretched like whoa! For the concept: 4/10
I'll break up EA and take this simple bastard out of the game
...When i throw danny right in the middle of his last name.......(ocEAn)
Shouldn't have explained it, would've been nicer to have figured it out. Anyway, this was decent bar. I'm going to say 5/10
And if you holding secrets, something you dont want to speak
I'll laugh and all while i crack ya skull and let your information leak
Geez... ummm... ummm... 5/10?
He should of never took up rap, I got this wack cat shook up
Since he knows this is more of a miss-match then a lesbian hook up!
I'll give you another 4.
He needs the best of healing, since this loss got his emotioins reeling
So cut your heart out , mail it overnight and express your feelings!
lol, fairly funny wordplay. I'm gonna say 6/10.

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I was never good at Math, but I think Lyrisic takes it.

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Originally Posted by +Danny Ocean+

it's 10-8
The realist and Dizzles vote don't count.Plus one voted for me and one voted for u.

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woah woah woah....all the votes count, or we go back and strip ALL the bullshit votes...in which case it would be a lot more then two, and a slightly larger difference....i mean there was a guy that voted for you that complimented your verse with things you didnt do, and complimented my verse with things i didnt do....so we're not stripping votes until Smoka comes and says it himself....