lmao axl is a legend... he needs no work... just to shake off his rustynessQuote:
Originally Posted by $pitacular
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lmao axl is a legend... he needs no work... just to shake off his rustynessQuote:
Originally Posted by $pitacular
Upping over the closed
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Originally Posted by AxL Prose
Quo-26/80Quote:
Originally Posted by Brethren
Breth-38/80
Please show me which lines of Quo's were good.
Quo basically dissappointed me..
and Breth surprised me.
V/Breth
No offense. But I haven't written a verse in 6 months and my shit could put some of your's to shame. I don't degrade anyone in a vote so don't do me that way. I honestly did the verse on the spur of the moment as I didn't have time like I thought I would. If you wanna nitpick i'll clean my teeth with your verses and show you where you flipped your shit from. If not then shut the fuck up. Nothing annoys me like cocky voters whose shit is sub-par in reality. Good shit Breth. I'll take nothing from you. I liked your verse as well. When I shake the rust off I'll battle you again and this time I'll try. I honestly didn't put forth effort cuz I had no clue who you were and figured "Hey.. another RB herb." pZ. Stay up.
^i suspect next week's opponent will be smashed?
^I suspect you might be right. I didn't know coming half-assed would give me this much greif really. And I do hate the cockiness of it all.
yeah..if u peep my sig..you'll see im the cockiest of all.
Hand ya ass to ya, you know that Quo is tighter man
Breth sports white stuff on his palms like Spiderman
good..
Got him fuckin shook from the beatin, cryin to be breathin
I'll put more knots in ya stomach then Cub Scout Meetings
good...
I'll wreck this fag, came in on a good tip and took the W in a bag
Kid's verse has more do's and dont's then his Cosmo mags
ehh, i didnt like it.
you want a tourny verse ? fuck it, i'll go off and kill this kid
picture perfect ? shit there's still negatives in Breth's development
i honestly don't get it
Got ya coughin up, chokin nuts, and throwin up the blood, say
I'll flip out and disect ya name and take ya fuckin Breth away
average
Hustle it up see just how I'm bustin ya nuts B
I flow outside the box, so this square can't fuckin touch me
above avg.. heard similar before
Insert some wit into ya shit, I read ya LLL spurt lucked
And it sounds like a regeratation of my verse when I sucked
cool
But we won't go there, I'm sure you've heard it before
Your verses are more of a drag then Elton John's whores
nah
I slay this whore... but you'll get a vote... maybe more
Cuz this fuck has been forgotten, and you were on the day before
dissed yourself here.. but a good punch to him as well.
You're less than famous... I laugh when ya body hits the fan
Is it too soon? are you still crying over Hottie being banned?
didnt hit him.
He oddly is a man... dude's on the internet hangin with ladies
And I know ya punches are played cuz you still usin slang from the 80's
ahah... cool
Mangle this trainee... spitting those weak metas thinkin it works
I'm searching for the sky when I'm trying to dig up his dirt
maybe im having a bad day today, but if there was some hidden meaning behind this i don't get it. kind of evens it out, i didnt get a line from both of you.and this never happens to me .. :(
And this chicken'll hurt... Breth'll be rippin his spine up
We knew you were wack...but you had to go remind us
cool
This cat tied up... and gag him cuz he just annoys this...
Quotient must be running out of lead... his shit was pointless
no ..
Give him choices... and wow... this fucking kid's a rebel
I'll have to destroy Axel like I was playing Twisted Metal
nice..
You get a medal for that guy... I laugh cuz ya paper is tender
Man... I did read your verse... and I can't say I remember
played..
vote - breth . i was hoping quo would win this, lol. But breth had like, one more good line than quo did. i honestly enjoyed both your verses though, depite quo being rusty he came pretty good.
Yea my bad Quo, I forgot you were still shaking rust off.Quote:
Originally Posted by AxL Prose
I just was 99% sure that you would beat Breth...
but he came pretty nice.
sorry for the "cocky" voting :)
explanation: Wordplay here is on picture perfect, negatives and development. Hopefully you can take it from there. Has nothing to do with breth = breath, unless I'm totally missing something.Quote:
you want a tourny verse ? fuck it, i'll go off and kill this kid
picture perfect ? shit there's still negatives in Breth's development
Breth wins 7-3 .. +10
Axl loses .. -10