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let it be written in the books of philosophies that i aint no beginner//
like this text battle bitch im the winner//
filler
you acting hard (u aint got guard) u hidin behind that pc // like a charlie on a tree//
lol.
you aint even close to 'allevate' hes a small improvement above you jus by a notch, but his punches arent microscopic like your crotch// played, filler, all of the above..
talk hard rollin with ya crew// but when you on that solo creep you dont repeat those lines of thirst devine violent rhyme scream 'fuck you bitch' scheme//
i cant tell wher ethis line ended its so long..
bitch imma split your spleen// fell my punches thru your computer screen// at the end of the verse no need to spit ne philosophies, cuz i can sense u shakin and barely sittin still// ill help ure scared bitch ass out with my punch rhymes to knock u out like nyquil// ok punch...
nigga i squeeze with my right but i gotta serious lefty
Only way the Don could beat me is through empical techniques
didnt rhyme well enuf..
yea let it be written in the books, how im the joker playin ya cards
how can i take you serious with a dragon ball Z name, "Sao The DOn"
at least it dissed him..
You's a tiny specimen, decreasin ya intervals, with elevated decimals
It looks like u the one need to improve, cause u all on allevate's testicles
ok..
its crunch time, amatuers like u spit horrible punchlines
i humiliate this rap fellon by just quotin his horrible dumb rhymes
ok..
if u not a beginner, then what u consider ya self as
when i spit u get nervous like when they talk bout pussy in health class
hmm... no
u will never be a winner in a text battle against philosopha
say u the don, but u will never be half as popular
filelr but dissed him at leats.
v- phil
its nothin
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ok voting on this return the favor if you havent already thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134407
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134382
Punches/ Personals: Phil was more personal in his attack and his punches requird a little more thought, so I give this to Phil
Creativity: I'll give this to Phil because the pussy in health class line made me laugh, even tho the flow on it was messed up at least it was creative and some wit behind it, work on addin some humor STD
Flow/ Structure: I didn't think either of you did a good job with this category, Phil your lines varied a lot and weren't consistant, and STD your lines were confusing in your structure, so neither get this one
Vocab: Nah neither was really good
So I give this to Phil for better punches, personals and more creativity V/ Philosopha
Now please return the favor
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sao the don- was ok a simple verse your flow and structure was good nothin creative nothin out of the ordinary no real and good personals it was a newbe verse your verse wasnt that interesting well ok a little bit your overall verse stat was a 5/10
Phil- it was a pretty good verse more than enuff to rip sao your structure was k and so was your flow I saw some personals your vocab and wordplay was also good it was enjoyable and interesting your verses overall stat was a 7/10
vote: Philosopha
