where did the second vote go? anyways...uppin...lets stop sleepin huh?
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where did the second vote go? anyways...uppin...lets stop sleepin huh?
damnit aight
I broke the shit down earlier but my comp fucked up and lost the shit so this is going to be short and sweet if it doesnt count then sorry
S I think it would have been alot closer and you probably would have won if this dude was a bitch but what can I say other than he isnt it was a nice verse and all just check your shit befor you spit
recca nice verse but change your fucking name I thought you were a girl too your lucky your not or you would have lost this one
sorry I didnt say more
oh and recca fuck you both of my verses were better than that finesse bitches
oh hey and anyone who sees this link could you hit it up so the shit will be finished
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=133321
uppin for my last time...lets get a couple votes...i'll return the favor in your battle
sdizzle
structure was good...flow was on target, for pretty much the whole thing...u had a few metas...wordplay was ok, alot of it was played, but still pretty good nonetheless...some of ur punches connected, the rest were punches about him bein a girl...which leads into personals...where almost all of them were fake...which hurt u greatly in this battle...
ReccA
structure was ok...ur lines were stretched though...ur flow fell off a lil, due to the stretchness of the lines...u had tight metas in every line....wordplay was ok..some of it seemed a lil forced though...more then half of ur punches connected...personals were pretty good...
Overall
sdizzle had the better structure and flow...both had metas...both had ok wordplay...recca had more solid punches, and because most of sdizzles personals were fake, recca takes that category as well...so basing off of that...recca gets my vote, as punches and personals r more important then structure and flow...
VOTE - RECCA
Please return the favor on the link in my sig
wow recca got this...i mean sdizzle droped a verse,
for a girl...and recca is a boy...so sdizzle's disses sucked...
recca fix yur struc...that shit looks gay...seriously...
but you came with the better approach...
considering the fact that sdizzle didnt no...
you had enough connecting punches to win this recca...
id like to see better shit from you though...
u can still elavate...sorry sdizzle but you had,
good shit if ya was dropping to a girl...
but thats the only reason you fucked this up...
so blah...vote/recca...better overall verse...
Alright ill vote on this cuz this is getting slept on...
Uhh s dizzle your opener was rather homoerotic... y u asking him 2 take off his pants... u had decent flow and sturcture. creativity was aight. Same wit delivery. metas were ok. try comin wit better concepts. punches were aight.. nothing great... truthfully you lost my attention at times. Recca you had a huge stream of conscious style in this one. you just typed what came 2 mind and that is admirable... especially when it turns out the better of the two pieces... you had a lot of creativity... not too played.... and you had decent flow... iono bout ur structure tho. none the less i enjoyed it more... good battle
hit up my battles
props 2both
peace
vote-recca