This was a really really dope rhyme
Nice vocabulary,flow,nice everything
keep it up
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This was a really really dope rhyme
Nice vocabulary,flow,nice everything
keep it up
Great choice of topic matter..
stayed with the flow and somewhat was biblical truth
how things will happen..
figuring you are a religous believer or just have
a relationship with God...or you study the scriptures somewhat.
nice structure and flow..as well as nice use of vocabulary..
stay writing..
peace
Up.....post a reply and link ...Ill check it out...
Uppin....Leave a reply and a link and Ill check it out...
thanx....peace....
Well Ill up this one more time....leave some feedback and a link....Ill check it out....peace..
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Thid topic is played yet u did a good job maing it ur own. Ur vocab came off strong and this complemented ur great imagery. I applaud ur story telling capabilities.It flowed well and it set the mood for a great story to read. You must read the bible or sumthin cuz biblically it matched up in certain areas. great job in re telling events in the bible and putting them in ur own words. Overall real good piece. Keep it up i'll be looking for more of ur work.
holy shit dude i loved this piece. I tried a topic just like this bout a year ago but it never worked out, this just killed it. I loved every bit of it, stayed on point and nothing fell off in my opinion. keep it up man.
Thanx guys....Again,Ill check out your pieces when I get home from work today.....Peace...
Meh.....uppin this one for fun...Ill return the favor....Leave a link...peace..
Tacyixx, This is a scroll of truth, and, not meaning any offense to anyone, I can not believe no one commented on the actual topic at hand...Your scroll was perfectly written and acts as history...and everyone just says "Hey good subject matter, love how ya talked about God and Satan" This is the new era and Satan is forever devoured by Gods Wrath and Rage......So for all who have eyes to see and ears to hear, read Tacyixx's scroll again and again, until you have been enlightened by a most wonderful revelation of The Millenium!!!
Wizz