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When You Take Our Your Wackness On Me
I Voted Rite So STFU
I Read The Whole Fuckin Thing
And Wtf Why Should I Give You More Explanation If i WAs Just Gonna Say You Was Wacker And Wacker On Each Line
So I Just Broke It Down Overall So Stfu If U Know Wat You Talkin About
TAlkin ABout My NAme
ill win this battle but you'll say i didnt win it fair
i dont care go back to countin your pubic hairs
And Me Take Ya Serious???
No Need To Say More
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dyselic: u was good ya verse was tight n ya diss him betta
ite then,
Dyslexic, Best line-I don't need to spit punches when this battles already taken
I don't need to hold grudges, I'm battling Clay Aiken.
This was pretty original, funny 2.
u kinda flowed, rest of the punches werent 2 good tho, there were no personnals, y dont u try lookin @ his profile an tryin somthin wit his name. U need 2 take a closer look at who you're battlin' next time stead of rushin.
B.X.P, Best line- You chose the battle against me cause you thought i was the worst
I went second cuz i knew you was stupid enough to go first
No1 likes a feeder, fortunatly 4 u it woznt in the rules not 2, but atleast u flipped them pretty good, flow was good aswell.
Vote/ B.X.P
I didn't really like this battle much.
Dyslexic - You had good flow, but I didn't really like the rest of your verse. You had several punches, but none that were very hard hitting or personal. You need to find out more about your opponent before you battle them. Or talk about their name.
B.X.P - You had good flow, but I felt you took this with more personal and more effective punches. They were wittier and nore effective, although you still weren't strong enough in my opinion.
Vote = B.X.P
Someone please hit up my majorly slept on battle with PurFormIt, please.
dyslexic
B.X.P doesn’t have the balls to spit first
I’ll merk him anyway cause my shits unrehearsed
4/10...um....
I aint got time to wait for some weak pre-written
‘bout his late night prison kama sutra positions
4/10...wut r u talkin bout....
So take a close look before u post what you’re spittin’
Cause your battle rap is gonna need a couple revisions
6/10...alright...
It’s not my freestyle that’s leaving you speechless
It’s that dick in your mouth that you’ve been sucking like leeches
6/10...nuttin creative about this punch..
But even leeches don’t suck off same-sex creatures
So go back to kneeling underneath the bleachers
4/10....wack
I don't need to spit punches when this battles already taken
I don't need to hold grudges, I'm battling Clay Aiken
5/10...wack...
Take your fucking time with your rhyme dictionary
Cause there’s no possible way you could win this shit fairly
6/10...ehh...
--By the time you read this line
I’ve eXecuted this mime
Pulling apart this newbie was a waste of my time--
6/10...theres nuttin creative about this...theres no punch, and its not even a personal...
I’ll show this bitch how serious I get about my rhymes
When his body gets discovered by CSI
5/10...no punch, no interest...
overall - 5.1....this was jus borin...no punches...didnt really keep my interest...
bxp
I read you verse have to admit your B.X.P line touched a nerve
Im surprised you can connect the letters to form a word
6/10...alright...pretty witty...
But im not hatin I guess the emcee in you has yet to awaken
But your mistaken show some respect your dad IS Clay Aiken
4/10...weak attempt to feed of his verse
This battle is misleadin after I post this you bitch about me feedin
But you forgot im a leech and leeches leave you bleedin
5/10...atleast it flowed, well....thats pretty much it
You chose the battle against me cause you thought i was the worst
I went second cuz i knew you was stupid enough to go first
4/10....wack
You wanted to diss me so bad so you posted no limit
hell you spit twenty lines and you still couldnt win it
6/10...this is the highest ratin ur gonna get if u keep spittin shyt without punches..
ill win this battle but you'll say i didnt win it fair
i dont care go back to countin your pubic hairs
5/10...wack
You saw "new to RB" and said this kid is goin to get a merkin
im certain you brought the balls cuz your dick is never workin
5/10...weak...
I saw yo girl under the bleachers she looked like a fucked up creature
I put a bag over her head but dont get me started on her face features
5/10...cmon man...wheres the personals, REAL personals
I'll give you a clap on the back just for being stupid enough to try
lyrical attack on the skillz you lack next time decline and you know why
[b]5/10...nice flow...not a really wack line...
overall - 5...u lost...ur shyt was so simplistic, u had a good flow at some points, but this wasnt good...
v.dyslexic....can u return the favor in my sig...
close battle
D- overall your verse was alright at best, your structure is really the only thing that you had goin for you, i think that your word play basically sucked and your shit was real basic....also some of your lines didnt make any sense, and your shit was so played like i remember a battle where i have used all of your words in like 2 lines, ellevate badly man your best line was.....
I don't need to spit punches when this battles already taken
I don't need to hold grudges, I'm battling Clay Aiken
BXP- overall this was descent verse it was one of the worse ones that i have read from you i think that you are ellevatin.....in this battle i liked your structure alot, and i think that you pretty much dissed him on everything that you could diss him on, pretty good job overall man your best line was..
This battle is misleadin after I post this you bitch about me feedin
But you forgot im a leech and leeches leave you bleedin
and that wasnt even that good, overall i guess BXP gets this but feedin is wack man
ok not to shabby of a battle (haha I said shabby)
I noticed that B.X.P. had harder punches but dslexic definetly had more creativity. But punches and personals are what wins a battle. Props to both.
Vote-B.X.P.
dislexic- lacked creativity, punches were weak, you didnt have a good opener or closer... elevate major..
B.X.P.- ehhhh not bad for a first battle.. i saw a couple of good punches.. overall i liked your verse better..u had a better delivery
vote- B.X.P