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I really liked this piece. It was kinda short, but still, dope. I kept wanting to know more as I began reading, which was another good thing about it. And the structure there was perfect man, I really liked it. Seriously, it was dope. Imagery was great there, I also liked the topic too. I liked the imagery coz it was a great way of you putting your ideas together. Flow was perfect, and the vocab. was dope :thumbup:.
Peace
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Dope piece yo, one of the good ones i say, imagery was tight i coudl picture everything in my head instantly as i was reading your verse. UM uh checkmine out
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