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feelin dis piece to da fullest...nice imagery story had me locked da whole way through...vocab was decent...i liked the way the storm coincided and represented his life...
quote:"His life was taken with this storms tragedy"
dats da line im talkin bout...his life representing da storm good symbolism
overall dis was a good read
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uppin for mo'
I appreciate any and all feedback.
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leave links to ur work fuckers
I'll then read them too.
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almost a week with no feedback,
my bad pieces got more feedback then this.
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