DAYMMMMMM HE GETTIN SMOKEEDDDD
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DAYMMMMMM HE GETTIN SMOKEEDDDD
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Kon Quest - Your structure was nice and the length of your lines gave it a good flow. You had some okay personals and punches, but both could of used more work. Keep at it and you'll get better. Average verse.
WiSeCraCk - Your structure was poor and your verse didn't flow at all. Your one and only personal was no good and your attempted punches missed. You need to elevate man. Below average verse.
V/ Kon Quest
okay thanks for the critism and such, i am elevated enough to be pretty confident...i just did a lazy verse and kinda slacked off, who cares
peace y'all
Kon Quest
structure was good.....flow was on target......there were some metas.....wordplay was ok.....some of the punches were ok, most of them didnt hit hard, but u did have some punchlines....personals were decent....
WiseCrack
structure was wack....even out ur lines more man....ur flow fell off due to the structure.....a few metas....wordplay was ok.....no good punchlines at all.....no personals....
Conclusion
Kon Quest had a better structure....a more stable flow.....more metas.....better wordplay.....and better punches and personals.....so basing off of that....Kon Quest gets my vote...
VOTE - KON QUEST
Ill come back and poll once at least one u leaves an honest vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130937
Kon- I think that u DID have really good punch lines, i enjoyed reading it i think u did really good on personals, and your structure to me was complete. i dont think that i would correct anything about your thread. U DID GOOD MAN
Wisecrack-Well i disagree with the other votes, i think that u had a few punches, and your personals were real involved, i like your structure it was good.
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My vote still goes to
KON
nice battle.
wise crack your verse was good, except a lott of it didn't make sense. seems like all you wanted to do was get a lott of stuff that sounded good. with the rhyming and what not. it sounded good, but as far as quality it didn't quite cut it. didn't have any personas. nice flow, ok structure.
Kon Quest opened up with a good personals. perfect flow and structure. made much more sense. so your punches were more direct and harder hitting. it didn't just sound good ya feel..
vote- Kon
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