thanx...............cutie......................... .........thanks you for the feedback
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thanx...............cutie......................... .........thanks you for the feedback
i need mo' feedback.....
brotha preach mo'. man u only tellin the truth.many men are in war.many of them don't make it alive.yea i could feel the emotion.i thought that you had a good flow. i could read it quite easily. also you need to work on your structure.though your verse was good.nice word play.it was good.keep writin.
Peace..can we be friends
yo dawg even though we had battled b4 man you koo...
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need to upp it.........
need mo' feedback......plz
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Aight man.. you asked me to write some feed.. and you gonna get some. I aint gonna hold nuttin back, and I wanna tell the truth.
1. Multies needed a bit more work, but they were awsome, the ones you had in there were very awsome.
2.Word Play- Yeah.. something you did good! I enjoyed some of them.
3.Emotion- I LOVED IT! I FELT IT ALL IN HERE DAWG! It made me feel good when you talked about God like that. We all need God in our lives.. some people just dont think we do. Im glad you speak the truth.
Overall- I loved your piece here.. you expressed the emotion real well.. let me tell ya.. i know you would make a good solo album if ya really tried at it. My rating too you man is a 8.4/10!
GOOD JOB!
Yo Gen, very nice work man. I really enjoyed this. Youre flow has improved since the last time I peeped one of youre Oms, and youre wordplay is very much refined. So good work on that. An overall nice piece, and its good to see u wrote it from heart.
Yo, theres something I noticed in the last line, was wonderin wether u meant it to come out that way. :Is this spoken in a reminiscent tone?
Neways, Keep droppin, I'll be certainly lookin for yah Oms in the future.
Look at one of mah Oms if u can man.
.Edit. - *respondin to how u posted that I need a girl Om piece.
Lols, (hints to that new Jess chick) .. :thumbup:
Rofl. Peace
thanx man for the feedback.......................................... ...
u can drop mo' if u want........
thanx..plz