BATTLE : Mc_Scibidy Vs. Rippar

Rippar

ok scibidy,with that name stolen from d&b,its spelt skibadee
did u think no-one would notice, but i noticed ur a "mad mc"

okay punches being used

they should lock u up,mental asylum man,throw away the key
do u even think when you spit that elementary

poorly rhymed, not very strong punch,

read your shit man,it stings like a butterfly not a bee

okay

ur structure is fucked,ur ryhmes are wack i'm trying to stretch the same rhyming words purposely

okay punch, i see what you're doing

just to show you it only works if youre battling a newbie
it works against rippar, shut up fool, not even when i'm rusty
heres some advice,elevate,u need to if u want a chance,trust me
aight i'm thru with this bitch, try again rookie

you shouldn't rhyme only one sylable. Both sylables of the last word should rhyme

scibidy

u think your bad//
u think your good//
using my words just cause u could//
just cause my words ain got copywright dont mean u should//

this isn't even a punch

do you think your smart?//
i dont htink you are//

not a punch

cause rappings an art//
if rapping was a car//
your car would not start//

i see what your'e trying to do, but this punch is weak

so next time try this//
by this.................i mean rapping//
you better stop cacking//

this isn't a punch

cause battlings for the big boys//
you better go play with your toys//
and all them little boys//

this isn't a punch

scibidy, the whole point of a battle is to at least offend your opponent. i can see only one line in your entire verse that does this.

Rippar, you didn't need a lot to beat him and i think that's the only reason you battled him...
...but you did have better punches and a structure so

vote: Rippar