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This battle was weak. Both of yaw didnt have punchlines. I don't even want to embarres yaw less yaw new to rhyme.
MC scib... WTF was you tryin to do. Rhymin from one word like 50 times! seriously made rhymes out of it like 6 times? WTF??? You was weak man. Borin. Read books for real man, increase ya vocabulay and watch a lot of tv. You could get punchlines wacthin tv. And hit the man hard, I know you got some stuff in ya head think. If ya need some cereal and vitimins to help you think do it. weak rhymes try hard next time b.
MC kiwi.. ya name explains ya skills. you is sweeter then a kiwi. Dude you ain't no better then your oppenent, and you had the better chance of winning. Punchlines!!! Punchlines!! Yours sucked. I didn't no girls stung people like a bee? you horrible but keep tryin, i ain't the guy to call you garbage and thats it, keep worjin at it wacth tv read shit get info on the world. increase vocabulary.
Both batles were weak but I give this to fruit man kiwi. change ya name kid, stay up.
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You Two Are The Kind Of Mothafucka's That Make English Rap Wack As Fuck..........
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Weak as fuck...
MC S - Dude, you need to go to "Extreme Elevation" right now. I'm serious, that was fuckin' wack as hell. No creativity, no punches, nothing. I can't even comment on the flow or structure coz it's just not a fuckin' proper verse. Ugh elevate. Work on everything. And stop repeating the same rhymes over and over again. It's fuckin' annoying.
MC Kiwi - That was wack too. You need to go to "Extreme Elevation" with your fellow wack partner. But at least you came harder than him lol. At least your verse made sense, unlike his. You had no punches, everything was wack. Elevate son. Work on everything. Read the tutorials in RB Help Center.
V/Kiwi
Don't hit my battles up.
