kautious vs the judge

^brend you make me laugh lol....................now get of my comp and go home...4th

Easy to decide...

Judge
Not the best I've seen from you but still had nice punches and personals. Best was the opener and your worst was the Born To Kill-Forfill one in my opinion. I spotted the flow and it was actually quite good but structure was all over the place. But overall good job...

Kautious
You aint elavated since I beat ya months ago it seems. You still have the potental but your wordin your punches and personals wrong. Don't use MS Word.....for obvious reasons. Flow was choppy too. But stay at it...

Overall I vote Judge for an overall better verse

5th sum1 please close this shit/..................thanks everyone for the votes

vote- judge

Reason:
Judge- ur spit just look better in every way. Ur verse was easily red, and had alot better flow. Structure was aight, not the best but aight. Didnt really effect the flow of ya verse. Ya vocab was good as well, nothin special. Punches landed pretty good. And personals was set up aight, and then whent he punch came around, it ended up being good.

Now Kautious- ya verse was really hard to read. It seemed like ya verse was jumping everywhere. I couldnt really read through ya verse good. Ya structure and wordplay a huge part in why ya verse had sorry flow, i suggest better structure for the near future. Vocab was not bad. Personals were straight, nothin special.

Vote- Judge

hey judge hit ma future topical up when me and the other kat spit, thanks.