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I think seven took this he had better punches and personals his flow and structure were good also. Jugs verse wasnt great it seemed pretty weak, but the flow was good and i love that structure its good to see somethin new, both vocabs were good also i think Jug needed to make better punches and personals then this would have been closer, ive gotta give this to seven basically beacuse of the punches and personals, work on those Jug,pz.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=129868
up................................................ ........
uppin x4................................................ .........
Seven....
Jug uh Knot isn't talented, so let me school this bitch.
He reminds me of a diaper,
Always on my ass and clearly full of shit.
umm, not much of a punch...shit punches
in general are just played..n this was no
different...weak at best 2/10
Is this an ICP group, crew or juss some dick rode fans.
Jug Uh Knot, Insane Joker Lyricist,
This has to be ICP's Stan.
wack...sort of a personal, but there wasn't
really a punch..more of a statement..1/10
I love battling herbs, he drops like gay movies fall.
He's so dumb he stuck a phone in his ass,
And thought he made a booty call.
lol..but no...this shit is mad played, and hella
old...1/10
'llI chop ya and yelled out to your crew timber.
He's proud to be IJL, the rest ain't,
That's how come his sig only has 5 members.
ehh, had the personal..though it didn't
do much good because of the eneffectual
punch... 1/10
Ripped him to shreds, I know his rhymes aren't hard.
After this battle he'll be gone,
Juss like when I look for his avatar
blah...no diss, just a statement...1/10
Jug...
i was hoping for a no show, i still have a grin..
cuz after that verse, all i need is a..
...no show verse to win
decent opener..i didnt like how you said
'no show' in the punch and the setup, but
not bad...2/10
kids name is seven, i must earn his respect
calls american idol racist, cuz he's a reject
nope...no punch, filler..1/10
your screwed, learn the fuckin basics duuude
told him to throw a punch & said..
Quote:
Originally Posted by Se7eN
I'll do it in a battle.............or try to...................
lol, this was good..hit nicely w/ the personal
im not a big fan of quote punches, though
still it worked 5/10
still answers newbie call outs, things havent changed
not even my crew, IJL, could make Se7en deranged
umm, no...okay setup, but the punch not really
a punch 1/10
Another crew battle win for IJL, im getting used to this
his rap skill is full of holes like cheese called "Swiss"
lol..yeah it made me chuckle..but not a good closer
the meta just far too simple..1/0
Jug~10
Seven~6
In Conclusion...
not all that great of a battle, in fact it was
pretty weak from both..though i'd have to say
that Jug took this ,but just barely..
basically the few punches he had, seemed
in my mind at least, to hit slightly harder than
the few Seven had...namely the quote punch..
plus i felt that while jug didnt come all that creative
he was a little more original w/ his verse
where as Seven came largely played...
close but...
v/ Jug
fuck...
sorry about posting twice fellas, but
i forgot to include this link...
both of you hit it up..por favor
thanks & pz.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=129827
this was an decent battle...
Ayo,
Jug uh Knot isn't talented, so let me school this bitch.
He reminds me of a diaper,
Always on my ass and clearly full of shit.
Is this an ICP group, crew or juss some dick rode fans.
Jug Uh Knot, Insane Joker Lyricist,
This has to be ICP's Stan.
I love battling herbs, he drops like gay movies fall.
He's so dumb he stuck a phone in his ass,
And thought he made a booty call.
'llI chop ya and yelled out to your crew timber.
He's proud to be IJL, the rest ain't,
That's how come his sig only has 5 members.
Ripped him to shreds, I know his rhymes aren't hard.
After this battle he'll be gone,
Juss like when I look for his avatar.
7 - Great verse dawg. It was easy to read, unlike Jug's verse. Flow was almost perfect. Liked the structure, it was good. Punches were very good... Problem was, I kinda saw some of 'em comin'. You gotta try to be a bit more complex. But it was aight, they were good enough to beat him.
i was hoping for a no show, i still have a grin..
cuz after that verse, all i need is a..
...no show verse to win
kids name is seven, i must earn his respect
calls american idol racist, cuz he's a reject
your screwed, learn the fuckin basics duuude
told him to throw a punch & said..
Quote:
Originally Posted by Se7eN
I'll do it in a battle.............or try to...................
still answers newbie call outs, things havent changed
not even my crew, IJL, could make Se7en deranged
Another crew battle win for IJL, im getting used to this
his rap skill is full of holes like cheese called "Swiss"
deranged= insane and other meanings
Jug - Your verse was good too. But the structure was fucked up, wasn't easy to read at all. Your punches were as good as 7's... You could've been more creative though. Flow was good, but 7's flow was better. And like I said, the structure fucked everything up. Personals were there too.
V/7
uppin x5.............................................
bumpin this for 7
seven merked jug in this battle i felt like jugs verse was soft i didnt really see those many hard hitting punchlines in jugs verse.. seven had clever line after line.. nice personals like those lines talking about the members in his crew also the booty call line was nice also
aiight man can you return the favor in this battle also http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130253
peace
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thanks axe, i knew i couldnt lose to him. up, NO HERBS. None.
Se7en
Best Line:
I love battling herbs, he drops like gay movies fall.
He's so dumb he stuck a phone in his ass,
And thought he made a booty call.
funny..but you said 2 ass lines..bad
Worst:
Jug uh Knot isn't talented, so let me school this bitch.
He reminds me of a diaper,
Always on my ass and clearly full of shit.
no..just no
Jug Uh Knot
Best Line:
i was hoping for a no show, i still have a grin..
cuz after that verse, all i need is a..
...no show verse to win
decent...very decent
Worst:
Another crew battle win for IJL, im getting used to this
his rap skill is full of holes like cheese called "Swiss"
gay as hell
Vote-Jug
Jug got this because he had punches that hit harded...well he had one punch that hit harded...both came pretty weak though...Se7en your shit was so elementary..the first lines sucked ass...you got better but that killed you. Jug had a good opener and the rest was blah..but still had enough to win.
WoW this was real close all most close enuff where i dont want to vote.
heres how it is
7=you had a witty verse i was feeling it all the way didnt fall off once
and was a good verse well done nice punches multies and structure
key in a battle is the punches and structure you had every thing needed
for a great verse.
fav line from 7:
""'llI chop ya and yelled out to your crew timber.
He's proud to be IJL, the rest ain't,
That's how come his sig only has 5 members."""
JUG=same thing with you very well done but he had a few more
wittyer punch on you and thats waht is allmost key in a battle the
punches structure and by going by that he just got this by a hair on my head
very good job both MC's have a real talent.
fav line from JUG:
""i was hoping for a no show, i still have a grin..
cuz after that verse, all i need is a..""""
very nice opener.
great job to both but im gunna have to go with se7en.
V/se7en
return the favor and hit my battle up:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130400
thanx
pz
...no show verse to win