Genocide21 vs.|< L | f F

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Originally Posted by Genocide21

aight.let me drop mines.....

yo check it...

Walk into this battle.I can sense ur FEAR AND DEFEAT.
Ready for action.Spit my ten lines without any BEAT.
U stand ova me.Bull Shit.I'll push u ova the CLIFF.
Tell da Cops,his name is Clifford,but we call him |< L | f F.
He had some troubles in his life so he committed SUICIDE.
Actually he had a fear of battling me. the great one GENOCIDE.
No clue it was a HOMICIDE,told the cops i respected 'em TOO.
Knew i killed this guy,plus be the ruler of the Squad up CREW.
Stepped up to me, but never suceeded, now join the others in HELL.
Ur jus like the Roman Empire that was defeated and FELL.

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he said he call the comps and tellem kliffs name lol

this battle went to genocide because he was more focused on dissing instead of just flowing, kliff would have won if this battle was in like.......00-01, but the standards have changed and genocide ripped this, well, murdered it...but not really a good kinda murder

go head and dq my vote

upppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn dis shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit!!!

c'mon this is my last uppin

Ok here's the breakdown

L]fe-you done pretty good up your complexity more and use better vocab, you had str8 punches.....................but work on flow a lil.................

Genocide21-Dawg you need better punches, flow, vocab, and structure..................work on that shit more and more so you can win battles...................

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let me explain my vote a lil better too

punches were important and [L] fe took this category everything else from him was ok and average..................like any ameture.......................but genocide21 couldn't put up a fight in this category....and that killed him in this battle and that is why he lost this battle.............along wit no flow

Remember not to up again Lethal.

i got to give my vote to lethal.. he seemed to be more wittier with his verse.. genocides verse was just filled with obvious disses nothing really was THAT creative in his verse.. i felt like lines like that shit about 21 and the fetch line were better disses than anything that genocide had in his verse thats why i vote for genocide

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uppin...to the top^^^^
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130500
check this open mic...

if i could vote i would vote for KLiff............................................. ........sorry but i can't...........................man Genocide you got owned.....................................not really your verse lacked structure................if it had structure than you would have won.....don't use fillers....Nice Job both of you.

geno...i am extremely embarrased to even read your verse...about the only thing that was remotly good was the structure...the closer was alright though...none of your punches were really hard at all and then diden't even connect...your flow dropped off after like the 4th line...you need to elevate a lot.

klif..verse wasent that bad...your punches were mediocre and they hit alright...you really really neeed to work ont he structure...it was killing you like hell...your flow was pretty decent the whole way through though..your closer was aight...beter then Geno' anyway...try to improve structure man...really.

vote-kliff