El Capitan

i liked it , good imageray , real belivable no bull sh^T , im was feelin it :)

thnx

LOL.. I feel you on the El Capitan. I rock that from time to time.

MOST THESE AINT OLD ENOUGH TO DRINK YO


give them time.

I ain't ol' enough to drink in the U.S but I sure take advantage of
my own countries godly rules. If anyone drinks Hoegaarden lemme know.
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Bk to point
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I liked this piece. Small, which gives more incentive to read, nice flow,
had a good lil motive to it and that bit of humour is always nice.
Like I always say, your flow is what makes me read your pieces.
That is your strongest asset. Coulda made it way better but you know that.
Pz.

Make sure ya hit this up plz.-
Chronicles of the Courageous (Pt 1): Oskar Schindler

that would be 'no' :^)