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Vote- E-Mortal
Cracka- Not good at all. As Daedal said, your first 2 lines were pointless. In fact, most of your lines were pointless. Decent struc and flow, but the rest was horrible. Only decent line was your retarded looney tunes line. You need more punches and more personals. Elevate.
E- Good verse. You had hard hitting personals, and you made Cracka look bad. Good punches, but I thought your bars were too long, they could've been shortened. Your verse was funny, and you easily beat him. I just think you need shorter lines, but otherwise no complaints.
Return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=129603
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he was a lil sad that you made him wait and with his distress signals you used for personals....
my link: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=129959
this was one sided.
craka-you didn't come with alot... you need sumthign more. it seemed more of a audio freestyle then a text. nothing really to say about it.
emortal- you spat pure personals on this man and thats what took it. the craka meal time line was good had me chukkling and thats why basicly i saw this as one sided cuz you had me on the enjoyment.
craka- you need to come harder with yea verse.
what the hell is with all these crakas?
lmao
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hmmmmmmmmmmm..............I don't know, they both good
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ok this was a good battle...
Cracker- First off, get a name chane newb. Second of all, no wonder you wanted a admin or mod to close this cuz your verse was horrifing. punches were brutal, they didnt hit him at all. you need to up your punches more. Personals need work also. They need to mak me laugh or there not good. They didnt make me laugh. Flow was off and structure was ok just work on it.
E Mortal had a good verse. Punches were a lil but played but they hit him. you didnt need to come hard,l you didnt but you still won this battle., FLow was good and structrue was good also. Personals hit also. Good job.
Cracka...just keep workin at it...you got some potemntial...eleavte
V. E Mortal...Go Poll
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Wasn't too pleased with this battle.....
Cracka wasn't that good. He didn't eally have any punches. He was beefing himself up instead of dissing his opponent......not a wise choice in a battle. His flow was OK but he had no wit behind any of his lines......
E-Mortal was OK. He had a few punches that hit but most were just average. His flow was OK and his attempts at wit weren't bad, just needed to be reworded a little.....
Vote - E-Mortal
