RASCAL 'vs' difrent page

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:laugh2: shut the fuck up you fool.. if you gonna bitch:flipoff:...
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vote-rascal

come on now rascal you are way better then to ever battle this nnob never do it again. for a 15 minute key it wasent bad...your best line was the closer...really nice...the personals did not really hit that hard but it was good.

tinker bell...your structure is messed up and you really need to diss your opponet more. once agin structure is a big problem...try to get some spelling fixes in there to...punctuation does not really matter just make it flow...you dident.

RASCAL...Vote On My Battle With Fer On This Page...Link Won't Work.

Okay, let me break this down.

Rascal, that was pure crap and I think you know it. Althought you did key in the better verse of the two, it still was not anything to be proud of. The personals were there but nothing spectactular, the punches were there but again nothing spectactular. I did not care for your structure as too many kids are doing that kind of thing now a days. I think you could come harder with complex punches not soemthing can be seen landing a mile away. Improve your vocab for one thing, as that would have made the compelxity of the drop. It was very simple and basic, althought waybetter that what tinker bell dropped.

Tinker bell, STFU and stop bitching! You got your ass handed to you by a very sub par drop. I understand why youre mad, shit I would be too, if I lost to something like that! Fact is, you have no structure in your drops, your lines are mismatched like a mother and you have zero content in my eyes. I was not feeling a damn thing from you, your vocab is horrendous and your spelling (which is not a thing) is worse than my own. Now that is bad since I am the first to admit my typing is sorry. You need to learn what a decent verse is comprised of, instead of talking shit about someone not knowing hip hop, when in fact you are the one who knows shit! Face it, that verse sucked ass, you can not compete on any level here on RB with that kind of drop. Clean up your structure, make the lines even, make good use of syllable count and try to set up some decent punches. Improve your vocab and learn to use imagery in your drop, not just some random fucken words that ryhme.

vote = rascal Just because his verse did not suck as much as tinker bells!
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you could of polled your vote atleast.....
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