Lyrcallyabbusiv vs Born to Kill

Born to Kill
If ya art's like ya craft at rap, Abbusiv needs growth...
Cuz if ya crime like ya rhyme, then kid, ya suck at both.
Not that hard of a punch
Leavin trash on walls and soon in this thread for me to read...
But after researching ya raps, I suggest ya post ya graffiti.
pretty weak overall
Ya 9 and 1 record’s off herbs, more like chickens and hens…
He faced guys that can’t fly but still got pecked by one of them.
same as your previous bar
Reppin a weak crew, and though we’re cool, I will diss Ace….
Cuz he’s always kissin my ass so much he know’s how it tastes.
Decent one i guess
Look at you disrespect kid cartoons, you really are an abuser…
Cuz Charlie Brown distracts from the fact that ya the bigger loser!
Weak as well

Not one of your best drops BtK
matter a fact, this maybe your worst


Lyricallyabbusiv
Stoppin em in his tracks,Hence,he wont go Forward,he came 2 an end..
I really dont know y u agreed 2 fight 4 a crew,dat u cant defend!
Filler..
Born to kill is it?...but uve already been merked b4, 91 times ...
But after this,i'll have em more depressed,dan his crew member Dimez!
Weak punch, attempt of a witty personal but failed
Its funny too...when you see a 34 yr old, get beat by a teen..
battlin me?ur insane,look at his brain__its as big as da space b2ween!
Filler as well
your shits weak,no punches or flow,while my shit flows like da Niagra
His brainz smaller dan his dik, and thats small, cuz he uses viagra!
I've seen a 10 year old diss better
Born to kill has died...again...the death of this emcee is untold..
a mystery HF cant unfold,cuz ya crew='s da sentence i rote in bold!*
weak wordplay, not a solid punch

I've seen better come from you aswell
i figured you would have taken advantage
due to the fact that BtK dropped horribly
You had a few witty attempts.. but failed to succeed
Sorry man.. but i gotta give this to BtK
Even though it was a weak battle...
...Btk had a few punches, and witty personals in his verse
As of where Lyricallyabbusiv attempted, but failed

V/Born to Kill

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Originally Posted by Com

lmfao... born 2 kill ruled this.... the other kid seriously needs to sort out his shit....

quotables:


wow,, there isnt any


anyways.. born 2 kill obviously merked this kid.... i mean come on.... is there any explanation needed?
better vocab. better flow, better punches. better wordplay enough said

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - ILLunatic

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^GAY BOY

right here goes...
the first guy did not attempt any legitimate punches.. he needs to understand how to rhyme a word that actually means sumthin and holds sway over the battle unlike the slightly higher quality verse spurned forward from our in house old timer Born 2 Kill... If had added the ingredients of wordplay a little mix of personals and a touch of humour he could have had the makings of a mediocre verse instead of the mass of ramblings that amassed infront of my very eyes while browsing through this collection of code we call Rapbattles... Had i not been under the influence of the class c drug marijuana i might have been quite angry at this blatant disrespect for quality and therefore reported the bitch....

VOTE BORN 2 KILL....

Repolled.

B2k: your verse was decent. I really wasnt feeling your punches. You had some decent personals but nothing quotable. i have seen way better out of you...but maybe you just knew this would be simple...

lyricallyabbusiv: First off your lines seem stretched as hell. your opener was damn weak as well. You threw a bunch of personals in that really didnt hit too hard nothing quotable throughout....

Final: i found this to be a rather weak battle indeed...nothing that really caught my eye throughout......If i gave it for technically and structurely the best B@K would take this hands down....so with that said B2K takes for experience and over all a better verse


B2K

Cool, cool...

The feedback is greatly appreciated, gentlemen.

Still, I can't believe ya'll didn't vibe with the Charlie Brown line.

That poor kid gets his ass kicked by his dog and chicks, everytime he pitches the baseball they hit it back so hard he's knocked literally outta his clothes, the football's always yanked away before he can kick it so he lands on his ass everytime, his dog has a doper crib than him, and he's already balding and he's justa kid.

I thought that line was hilarious.

Guess I'm the only one.

Peace

One more vote, peeps.

lol... hey Born to Kill... i c you have a fan lol... a bitin fan... heh..

Check this out peeps.....

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122814

He^^^stole my opener...

And, what?

Did he even let 12 hours pass before doing it?

Damn!

both had some average drops here.....

btk - good flow... punches were ehh... they didnt hit to hard.... personals were alright..metas, wp ... decent... structure good.. overall not a bad verse but it wasnt to creative.... and it wasnt ne where near ur best but, decent verse...

lyrically... creative verse... viagra line sucked balls...dimez line was alright... you had some decent punches... flow was a bit off... that hence forward is wack shit was gay... otherwise decent verse... but you lose for having a newbie verse... punches werent witty and hit less hard then btk's.... plus your metas and wp... need work...
you did decently, but not enough to win... get some harder punches, and creative personals... you used played concepts against BTK... think abuot it, he been beaten 91 times.... thinkof ur own way to diss him...

vote btk - verse was more original, better concepts... better structure punches... wittier....
un-newbish.