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Fer...
You say you on the block and that you got immunity,
when you cant even scare white people into helping you to battle me.
wat the fuck...Hell No!
I know you're young and just a little kid,
thats why i dont believe in half the shit you said that you did.
wat did he say he did?a quote would be nice...
Im so drunk whats my identity today?
this hennessy got me scratching at this itch to spray,
wat?seriously wat was this...
this crazy shit that will have you scratching at your brain.
Leave you mentally insane
like a scene from a movie about Timothy McVeigh.
:Rolleyes: k then....
Its not a game, this aint playstation,
its resident evil how i blow and leave you face gone.
its not playstation it's resident evil aint that a playstation game..
having a dope flow does not mean writing high on crack
face the facts,
you're disgraceful, faceless, with a tasteless act.
this was pretty good
You're no soldier, im that dude in the trenches, like you see on tele
You're that slut in the streets all weak and defenceless, soaked in piss from R. Kelly.(hahahahahaha)
atleast you entertained yourself
2/10
Oddball...
this aint a game of jax's kid so get your ass up to speed...
kid the only balls that your gonna be droppin or during puberty
seriously HELL NO
your right fer...i aint ready for this yet so you can just win
but i did read the first five lines and dident see the hits begin
:laugh: that was pretty decent
we got another follower of the kobe and kelly rape acts here...
kelly in the bathroom pissing so kobe gotta pop a shot in ya rear
Feeding :nono: but you flipped it well...
3-10
drop 10....TEN lines miinimum is the rules you fool..
Odd took this for a better finisher well flipped on him..
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i meant this battle is not a game, and carried on to use a resident evil line to show that he only relatess to games and thats the only way he will relate.
Must admit it was not a very good verse, but its obvious i packed more punches.
Quote:
Im so drunk whats my identity today?
this hennessy got me scratching at this itch to spray,
"wat?seriously wat was this..."
You cant judge it at this point because the meaning carries on into the next line. Its incomplete at the point you added your two pennies.
And with the first line, there is a stereotypical view in the in the world that white people are weak people compared to their black counter-parts so as a gansta claiming to be hard it would be a a disgrace nnot to be able to intimidate white people.( i did not mean it in a racist way cuz i am white myself, so there) I was just playing upon the view of most people. I think i am weak anyway.
UPPIN X1
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Fer- Wasent really feelin any of your shit. It seemed very simple. Just rhyming whot cut it. There was one line that had a dope flow:
"having a dope flow does not mean writing high on crack
face the facts,
you're disgraceful, faceless, with a tasteless act."
The dope part was played badly tho.
Learn more about punches. Elevate
Odd- Follow the rules man no matter what. That alone fucked you badly.
You posted under the min. and you also fed off his verse. It said in the rules that you couldent do that. Although I felt you had better lines I cant give you the vote.
Or otherwise rules wouldent mean shit. 1st bar was played. 2nd was pretty good.
And I did like the way you flipped his closer. If you hadent broke 2 rules you would have got this easy. Sorry man.
Vote- I have to give fer. the vote as bad as I hate to.
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Aight Weak Ass Battle
FerriariHov50- Ya Verse Sucked, Okay Okay it was Decent, But You had a lot of played lines and rhymes, And you really had no flow wasn't feelin a flow...Ya structure could use a little more work did weak on that...And ya punches pretty much i thought he had none...Elevate more then...on punches...
OddBall-Okay...Now first of all ya gotta follow the rules....And Second you posted off of your battler's verse...And it said in the rules...But you only had 5 lines and idnt follow rules but...Those 5 lines were decent enough to win it but if you had more lines you would have won easliy ...but i gotta vote for other guy he followed rules...
v/Ferrarihov50......hate to do this....
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i cant vote yet so i couldnt actually give a fuck bout the rules, however, every1 else does, 6 lines was easliy enough but 2 more would'v been better.
ferrarihov50: flow was good but the hits didnt come until the last lines an they were WEAK
vote-oddball
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This pains me.
Ferrari, your verse was terrible. You had played punches that hardly ever even hit...oh man, where they ever played.
Having said that though..Imagin..you didn't follow your own rules. Normally it wouldn't really matter, but you obviously thought you could merk this kid no matter what, and dropped bullshit. Your bullshit was better than his bullshit, but you had less of it.
/v Ferrari for more bullshit.
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ok..dman i get it..i will follow the rules from now on...my bad..sorry..no more breaking rules.
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.....this was painful.....
Fer.....you had nothing. No punches, no personals, no flow.......I think you need to start all over again and just take a look at what people are saying that are actually good. You can't just spit some 'I'll cut ya wit ma knife and wetcha wit ma gat!' You need to actually have clever lines to win a battle in here......
Imaginasian....you started OK but your closer was played and you did break your own rules.....would it have killed you to spit a couple more played out lines to take this win? If you would have said...I'll push you humpty dumpty/ so don't bump me....you would have won....
Vote - Fer.....he actually followed the rules
